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colifer
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since 2003-09-20
Posts 37
Ohio

0 posted 2003-09-22 12:59 PM


if you think that i care
i've got you
if you think i need your reassurance
then step through
because no one wants to hear you
so thanks sweet friends
(big big huggs)
untill we make ammends.

© Copyright 2003 Cole Simon - All Rights Reserved
QjQ
Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756
U.S.A.
1 posted 2003-09-22 01:22 AM


you expressed this well,,,,,

                                    

JilGirl
Member
since 2003-05-24
Posts 364
Washington
2 posted 2003-09-26 12:31 PM


VERY good!

'Tiz feathers that make the bird -
Always remember to keep them fluffed
but, never, EVER ruffle them!

angelblueyes
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since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148
Oklahoma
3 posted 2003-09-26 01:34 AM


Nice expression.
Crystal

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