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exhale
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since 2003-06-13
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0 posted 2003-07-01 12:13 PM


the moonbeams dance across your face
this couldnt be more perfect
your standing in front of me
hands on my waist
we slowly move to the music
my hands weave through your hair
this couldnt be more perfect
i've longed for you from afar
i've wished to be in this spot
exactly like this
for so long
kiss me
is all i can say
a smile creeps across your face
you lean in
this couldnt be more perfect...

...so kiss me hard cause this will be the last time that i let you...

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ecrivan
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my own state
1 posted 2003-07-01 12:20 PM


the moment before it all happens is described
well...couldn't be more perfect, nice


Kahlil
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2 posted 2003-07-01 12:20 PM


yummy!
BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
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By the Seaside
3 posted 2003-07-01 12:22 PM


hmmmmm, yes!  Love that perfect part!
Local Rebel
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Southern Abstentia
4 posted 2003-07-01 12:29 PM


well you make it sound like the perfect place for a kiss!
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with you
5 posted 2003-07-01 01:31 AM


this feels like a sigh...what a beautiful moment you've shared
Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
6 posted 2003-07-01 01:46 AM


Perfectly lovely!

Love & Light,
EA

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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7 posted 2003-07-01 02:29 AM


Oh I like I like!!   lovely write
Roniece Dawson-Bruce

passing shadows
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displaced
8 posted 2003-07-01 01:53 PM


good stuff
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