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0 posted 2003-07-01 01:04 AM



The same familiar places
The lost and broken home
You took them out from under me
And Now I'm left alone
Does it make you
To take it all away
Or does it break you
To know whats left today

I looked into my chest
The same old battle scars
The run in's with grief
That showed me who you are
Did it fill you up
I know it did
Straight to the top
It's overflowing now

Your words spilled out like fire
That covered up like ash
I focused on the pain
But it respawned so fast
I'd hidden once before
Although never again
You took away my sentence
Now I'm a stories end

The innocence is gloating
While you yourself must rape
Violate the weak and torn
By choice annihilate
I've watched you since day one
I only was a child
That makes no difference now
I still know who you are

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where the wild flowers grow
1 posted 2003-07-01 01:45 AM


This is a sad one! *sniffs* But I liked it very much
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2 posted 2003-07-01 01:55 PM


this one hurts
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