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Krissy
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0 posted 2002-12-16 12:45 PM




This Christmas Tree


I
--@--
I
@This@
Christmas
************
@tree. Bedecked@
with light, glowing,
*****************
@sparkling garlands of @
glittering beads. Each bauble
**********************
@shimmering with refracted light@
that shines so brightly. It is a symbol to
****************************
@each one of us. A symbol that winter will@
pass, and spring and new life will appear. We
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@have it as a sign, that HE brings light to us all@
this Christmas give the gift that means more. Give
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@the gift of love, let it shine in the dark places of soul. @
Give the gift of happiness spread the message of
I I
Peace
on earth
And goodwill to
all men. Shine
the Light of
Christmas


Krissy

And while thy willing soul transpiers
at every pore with instant fires
Andrew Marvell 1621-1678

© Copyright 2002 Krissy P J Searle - All Rights Reserved
regards2you
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1 posted 2002-12-16 12:58 PM



Krissy,

This is remarkably creative. Yes,
  "He brings light..." and may
He shine ever so brightly on you and yours this holiday season.

Warm regards, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

passing shadows
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2 posted 2002-12-16 01:24 PM


OMG How in the world...? That's awesome! Wow! Thanks for sharing, this is beautiful!
Balladeer
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3 posted 2002-12-16 01:42 PM


...and all this time I thought you were just another pretty face!

Awesome work, Krissy! I like your branches...

gemjop
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4 posted 2002-12-16 01:50 PM


beautifully presented! enjoyed the festive read very much!
lots of love, gemma xxxxxxxxxxx

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

Earth Angel
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5 posted 2002-12-16 02:29 PM


Simply stellar! A feast for the eyes as well as for the soul!

~ May you and your family have a joyful and blessed Christmas!

~ warm holiday hugs

Earth Angel

Marsha
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6 posted 2002-12-16 06:59 PM


Krissy beloved daughter mine, I suppose you think I’m going to tell you this is perfect and so very creative……… and so it is, very darling heart. You know I love it, but you also know I can do better don’t you? Mmmmmmm of course darling remember mummy can always do it better than you can.

My petit chou, tu est manifique ma cheri, you know I love you and love this well done beloved heart


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mum



Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the earthquake wind and fire

[This message has been edited by Marsha (12-16-2002 08:29 PM).]

Bill Charles
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7 posted 2002-12-16 08:05 PM


Krissy - what magic you do with this, really nice...

BC

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8 posted 2002-12-16 08:08 PM


What a fantastic presentation!!
Beautifully done!
~Happy Holidays to you and yours~

~ Season's Greetings to my 'family' at Passions ~

nakdthoughts
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9 posted 2002-12-16 08:08 PM


This is one of the nicest Christmas messages I have ever seen..and I HAVE seen a lot.

Beautiful Krissy

hugsss and Have a wonderful holiday
Maureen

Suetang
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10 posted 2002-12-16 08:12 PM


Hello Krissy

How lovely to see you here again.  This was absolutely marvellous and how talented you are in this awesome presentation.  I wish you and your mum much love and happiness during Christmas and into the New Year.

Take care

Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Wind
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11 posted 2002-12-16 08:14 PM


I loved that! What a beautifull Christmas tree. We are decorating ours right now. I think you did a concrete poem. I think that is what they called. Once I had to do one in the shape of a piece of toast. Well anyway, I'll stop my rambling. Merry Christmas!

Never be normal!

Titia Geertman
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12 posted 2002-12-16 09:20 PM



WOW
I wondered where you were hiden all this time, but now I know....You were decorating the tree!!!

Hi Krissy,

Titia

Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

Mistletoe Angel
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13 posted 2002-12-16 10:14 PM






(smiles) Oh Krissy, this is soooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, I just love the shape as you make up the star of a golden heart that tops the tree, God Bless You, we all wish you the happiest holidays, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Krissy, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Pilgrimage
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14 posted 2002-12-16 11:47 PM


What a neat picture! And so very true, too. I love it!

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

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15 posted 2002-12-17 02:14 PM


Beautifully done, Krissy! *S*
Kethry
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16 posted 2002-12-18 03:00 PM


Krissy,
just in time for Christmas cheer and so beautifully done.

Jay says "Christmas means lots of Christ," and you have brought a smile to my face with this delightful reminder.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



christian
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17 posted 2002-12-18 03:03 PM



you need to get arrested for being so
damn creative. :smirk: youve got me.
i like it. i think im experiencing seizures
from those neon colors raining
incandescense though .. ouch. **** [*****].

-chris.

Salty
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since 2002-11-23
Posts 669
Texas
18 posted 2002-12-18 04:25 PM


WEll this is just the cat's meow...and I almost missed seeing it.

What a very creative and unique idea...decorated beautifully I might add.


~Salty

In the Midst of movement and chaos, keep stillness inside of you.
--Deepak Chop

Laney
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19 posted 2002-12-18 04:41 PM


Very Nice Krissy---loved your presentation!!

two thumbs up!!     


--Alana

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