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nosceteipsum
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since 2002-12-18
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i look for a star to the east, a savior

0 posted 2002-12-18 05:05 PM


this ones to you
happy in the rest of your days
this ones to you
dont lose your breath inside the craze
just realize theres nothing sane
and you have to believe just like me
smile a little
and try to (think of the word i want) see

it takes more
to make me fantasize
a little less
than to demoralize
not enough
the worlds inside my eyes
fall away and breathe

this ones to you
the skys run through to grey
this ones to you
the mistake that they made
i cant be that bastard son
i dont know how to fly
i dont know him
i couldnt take that on

it takes more
to make me fantasize
a little less
than to demoralize
not enough
the worlds inside youre eyes
fall away and breathe

thats not the great blue yonder
a porch light doesnt justify a cage
too hard to breathe underneath big lights
the blur the meanings on the page
a friend...weve lost a friend indeed
fall away dont you breathe


(apologies if my change of forum was in some way...illegal. i decided i wanted it here.)

when zarathustra had said this the dying one did not reply further, but he moved his hand as if he sought the hand of zarathustra in gratitude...niets

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since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

1 posted 2002-12-18 05:08 PM


If you wish your other poem deleted all you need to do is contact a senior moderator or a deputy within the forum this was already posted in and they will delete it for you.
Enjoyed this very much, I found it to be a interesting write.  

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