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Maiden In Distress
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Maiden In Distress |
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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada 
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morning young she kept in her pockets kind thoughts she shared with trees man enters the picture young and bold, he wants her maiden fair refuses him he is not pleased with her answer mean he becomes maiden climbs a tree daring man tries to follow water from clouds yanks him down the young virgin was saved by clouds they appreciated her constant generosity- her supple step; they could not allow a rogue his pleasure **** **** **** ..circa 1986..Copyright 2002 Spiros Zafiris ..poem archived in several other sites ..channeled; from spirit, Ram; through Spiros |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) Oh Spiros, this is so very sad and terrifying, sweet friend, it saddens me to see some try and turn on others and risk hurting loved ones when the answer is no and would stop at nothing to force approval! (sad sigh) My heart goes out to all who are victimized by these crimes, sweet friend, God Bless You, this is powerful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Spiros, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada |
..Mistletoe Angel../\..thanks for reading and commenting; much appreciated../\..Spiros ----clouds came to the rescue-------- |
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Radrook Senior Member
since 2002-08-09
Posts 648 |
I have always been suspicious of those silent trees! Aha! Just as I suspected! They do think after all! Serves that fella right treating that fine young woman that way! Got what he deserved. Lucky for him them there trees couldn't pull up roots and come after him! Lucky for her she had friends! Sometimes we do receive help from those that we least expect it because we have been kind. Enjoyed the read! Thanks for sharing. God bless! |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Intriguing approach, Hooray for the clouds! Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada |
..Radrook../\.. + VAS../\.. ..your kind comments are much appreciated; thank you.. ../\..Spiros -----------------oceans-------- |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Spiros Unique and sweet...very much enjoyed. |
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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada |
..Martie..thank you for reading/commenting; i'm grateful for the kind words..Spiros --------------The Stars---Kindness--- |
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