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Sorry Toerag....
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Sorry Toerag.... |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981
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Everyone loves to pick on him, His tangled love life I should mention Is posted all over the internet (And I'm sure he loves the attention.) He's jelous of poor Balldeer Just because he's got a brain And the battle between them Must be causeing him some strain I didn't mean to put myself In between a crazy war But right now I'm with poor toerag (Yes I know my grammer's poor) |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is so sweet Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Wind, you must realize that Toe gives as good as he gets! ----if he reads this reply of mine, I bet he's going to put an entirely different spin on this! LOL Earth Angel |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
I'm with you Earth Angel, just somone needed to show him a little bit of kindness. Even though he doesn't deserve it (And he probably doesn't have much of a love life, balladeer made that up) [This message has been edited by Wind (10-30-2002 05:32 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (giggles in delight) Oh Liz, yes, Balladeer is a sly one and Toerag is a sensitive character, or is it vice-versa? LOL! I can't wait to see where this goes now, this is delightful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Liz, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
When it comes to fans, I know Bal's followers are legion But the wiser ones line up In the real winner's region And appreciate our prince While Bal's crowd shouts with glee Inflated numbers don't mean much - Toe's got the quality!!! Ah, Wind... I see you've been blessed with enlightenment and know that Toe is our true poetic treasure. *G* Aren't they fun, though? *S* |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
But Wind...I noticed ya got "Ball-deer's" love life down just by writing his name...good job! |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
Yeah, thats why the last line said that, I knew I spelled it wrong. But i didn't mean t that way. hmm glad you noticed it.... |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
It's a good write...and I think the mis-spelled word is GREAT!!! LOL |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Wind, my dear, this is cute, It seems like ole Toe's won you, too He comes right back with funny stuff, no matter what we do I know if someone came to the door when I'm reading what he's said They'd turn and leave, if they heard my giggles, thinking I'm outta my head I'm kinda wondering, though, 'cause he used my name, or was it LongJohn Sailor, or Ball-deer Or maybe he hasn't noticed that your name is "Wind"-----Now, I wonder what we'll hear??? I enjoyed your poem, Liz. Thanks for sharing. ~Love And Hugs~ Ethel |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Well, wind, you're sure right about Toe's non-existant love life. Rumor has it he renamed his waterbed The Dead Sea!  I think your punctuation is perfect. SORRY TOERAG without a comma is the perfect title for that dipstick. That's ok. I understand your siding with Toerag out of pity. He gets a lot of that.  |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
Ohh gosh, I saw balladeer's reply and couldn't stop laughing. I think Toerag misunderstood and thought I was writing about you. Not big on brains is he? |
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