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Open Poetry #23
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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
0 posted 2002-10-25 08:52 AM


Melting Lines


aching
for a candle’s fire
dissolving verse
within desire
solid lines melt
to liquid again
lit beneath
the fire of pen
yearning of
this waxen dance
hypnotized moves
to flickered trance
soothing scents
ebbs in flow
inspiration burns
poetry unlocks its glow

I’m not disappointed,  I never expected anything from you.
© Copyright 2002 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2002-10-25 09:19 AM

1slick_lady
Yes it is so.
Well done, enjoyed.
the_loner_23
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2 posted 2002-10-25 12:41 PM

Well said and beautifully written

Cold hands means a warm heart
Radrook
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3 posted 2002-10-30 04:30 PM

Seems that way doesn't it.
As if suddenly a lock is removed and we are carried away in the ease of the flow of inspiration.

Enjoyed!
God bless!
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4 posted 2002-10-30 04:36 PM



(sigh) This glows with such beauty, sweet friend, may the fire of inspiration always burn in your heart brightly! (kiss on cheek) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, you always shine with poetry, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira
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5 posted 2002-10-30 08:46 PM

Burnnnnnn Baby.....  Burnnnnnnnn....

Burn those candles....and melt that poetry
onto these pages....  Yep...  Well done
Slick one....  
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6 posted 2002-10-30 08:54 PM

Helen, This is great! You manage to say so much in so few words. Yes, this is how it seems when writing.

Thanks,
Warmly,
Pat

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