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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
only my heart hears the whisper of your sweet voice my mind counts the time grain of sand by grain of sand heartbeat by lonely heartbeat Inspired by:little questions Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
smoooootthhe! I like the way the words whisper of affection your 100grit love is smoothing my soul |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Exquisitely beautiful, Interloper... Short and very sweet.  ~ hugs from the heartLyra |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I'm building a fortress ....for my dreams a concrete playground ....where my heart's patience waits safely for you to bring the key. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You know, I just love to see one poet inspire another...this is more than lovely, it is very, very you... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Tick-tock, one by one Your heart beats its gentle song Zip-a-dee-doo-dah Sweet words your heart alone plays Guiding me to heavens here...  (smiles) Oh my gosh, I love this, sweet friend, your words always are soooooo romantic and are truly without a doubt "time"less! (big hugggssssss) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Interloper I like it, I like it. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Bob darling heart you know exactly how I feel about your writing I think it’s truly outstanding not just in form but the content is always so beautifully expressed, this is TRULY PERFECTION. I love this darling heart, it’s utterly utterly fabulous. My opened mouth as another of your word miracle unfolds before my eyes and my soft whisper of that is true beauty should tell anyone who saw me that I’m well pleased. YOU of course can see me through the power of your heart’s touch. This is something extremely special, naturally since you wrote it. You do know I love this utterly utterly utterly Your writing always makes the keeper list, excellent writing as always    Love and warm stuff As always Mushy Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
So beautiful. I remember feeling just this way. Sandra |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
You have broken the mold on sensual here!!! and I do so appreciate it!!  Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
**BIG SIGHS** How grave is my condition, for I cannot find the words to say, I need you so. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
my mind counts the time grain of sand by grain of sand heartbeat by lonely heartbeat Exactly where I am! Not complaining, just missing her a bit. Liked this a lot. Forgetting all I'm lacking |
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andEmmamakes3 Member
since 2002-05-11
Posts 66Kent |
Bob hi there, this has to be one of your best poems, the depth of feeling in this is amazing. I really love it. Your writing is truly magnificent, mum is right when she told me to seek you out, she is never wrong on matters of taste you know. But don’t tell her I said that Emma    Eternity, stands laughing at old time |
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