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meet me...anywhere |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Sandals faded Levis tshirts worn around the collar hand runs through my shaggy hair when I’m not bitin’ my nails when my hand’s not moving around your waist I need to touch you more than before I thought I could live on your kiss awhile I was wrong I need to touch you more than ever before please meet me anywhere Forgetting all I'm lacking |
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MIdsummerRain Member
since 2002-05-19
Posts 175St. Louis, Missouri |
Stunning; If she declines to meet you, then please come for me! ~Rayne For in much wisdom is much grief |
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mycafe Senior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 584 |
I could sense the passion and yearnings in here... ~mycafe Keep counting your blessings |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
oh yeah...this is the stuff that made me hop buses, street-cars, and taxi-cabs...in freezing sleet!  and-oh-his-arms-were-warm...funny, what y'can live on sometimes! hmmm...I think I just realized--I'M STARVING! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I hope she'll be there for you Duncan~ Nice invite! |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
METOO!! METOO! mmm.. I likes this poem! Delicious.. LOL !How grave is my condition, for I cannot find the words to say, I need you so. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Like this...James |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I agree with Temptress, this is just delicious Duncan. yummmmmieeee.... Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
You have a definite way with longing poems. Sandra |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
when my hand’s not moving around your waist I need to touch you more than before I thought I could live on your kiss awhile I was wrong =========================== like I said before WTMW .... allow me to give you something.... Moth Travel Agency...555-flame ... flights leaving daily...discounts available for advance booking..I hear Canada is lovely this time of year PS...get a haircut ya hippie  lmao  |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Who me? I’ll meet you anywhere Just name the place and I’ll be there I’ll meet you near, I’ll meet you far I’ll meet you in another bar And when we’re there, will you kiss me? For once was not enough you see Hmmm, what time does the next plane leave??? Everything is possible in the game of life |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Packing as we speak Duncan...Oh what do you mean it was not for me...It sounded like it was for me. Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Meet you on your front porch?? Dang! This is...this IS! ~Hugs~ |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
liked it  |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Sad...Duncan, but full of soul and beautifully written.  ~ hugsLyra |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) Oh Duncan, this is sooooo sad, sweet friend, I know with such a loving heart like yours she can never refuse, keep siling for love will always find a way! (sigh) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Duncan, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
I do know this feeling. Very cool write and I love the format you chose to present it in. The flow is excellent and reads wonderfully silently and aloud. Well done, much enjoyed. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
This is powerfully filled with a want and a need...YES it is...well written Duncan... Hope they hurry.... |
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