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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
did you miss me a little, wonder if the sun was still shining in places where you'd once been stunned did you think of me under cottonwood's fluff amid soft winds a’breezing, or were thoughts too rough… did you wonder, perhaps, if I still trace thoughts of you where dark shadows reside over veins running blue did you hear the whisper on the wind knowing, once again I was thinking of you just then? |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Soliel... this goes straight to the heart... ~R.T. "I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Soleil Noir With cupids arrow. |
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bags123 Member
since 2002-06-06
Posts 128 |
We'd all appreciate someones thoughts when we're apart. Nice! |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
Really love this, truly.  |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
only my heart hears the whisper of your sweet voice my mind counts the time grain of sand by grain of sand heartbeat by lonely heartbeat Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Soleil...perfectly beautiful! ~Hugs~ |
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EarthenSoul Member
since 2002-05-30
Posts 163WA, USA |
"where dark shadows reside over veins running blue".....absolutely love these lines! Great poem! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Powerful words. I hope you are thought of in all those moments. Sandra |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms noir, seems we always ask, and we always know the answer too am sure you were missed by many..enjoyed it |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
the wind speaks what the ears refuse to hear. . . excellent Soleil Noir. . . ---------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
OH Yes indeeeeedeeeee! Most certainly! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Soleil You put the question in such a way, that how could this someone not say, yes? |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
liked it |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
You all treat a little ol' country girl very well...thanks for the eyes, and the warm words... |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
did you wonder, perhaps, if I still trace thoughts of you where dark shadows reside over veins running blue love the words here, Soliel...  ~ hugs of thoughtsLyra |
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mycafe Senior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 584 |
Oh I swear I can identify with these feelings ! mycafe |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Soleil, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I too know these feelings and I wonder whenever I think of something if my friends and my love Joanna think the same or how they feel! (sigh) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Soleil, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
Enjoyed!  Shenachie |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms noir, can see this uncovered making sun kisses for eyes to capture enjoyed it ms |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy your read |
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