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D.Lester Young
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since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219
Austin, Tx

0 posted 2002-06-23 09:24 PM


Thundering purpose
Rolling down the plains
Electrically revitalized shock
In resurrected waters

Flooding baptism of faith
Absorbing desert in renewal
Resilient cactus limbs
Storing needed nourishment

Sudden flowering thanks
In a new found paradise
That the heat scorches
Into miniscule time tracks

My lips crack bone dry
Sending perspiration flakes
Into acidic salt spray
Sculpturing sandstone cliffs

Heat shock within a tormented mind
Exhaustion drained battery
Surviving on dead cells
Time to move on

A word alone so unique
It stands alone as a monument
A line so ambitious it struggles
On wings of solitude
Stanzas of perfection exhilarating

Poems are the terrain of the mind
They are the landscape that flowers
In time frames they capture the moisture
For the renewal of humanities rebirth

As the poems are joined in the faces of history
They provide the emphasis for resilience
The renew of the ritual purification
Of the survivability of natures purpose
From the blessing of the heaven of universes

In a shower of salvation
Cleansing the spirit of our time
I bow to the power of my verse
To join yours in stupendous power
Into a firestorm of meteors

In the fireworks of the ages
Let us renew the power of one word
Standing uniquely alone
Joined in lines of common thought
Creating stanzas recreating our world
In the words that adhere us
In the hands of God’s love

Email me if at davelyoung1@hotmail.com
D.Lester Young (06/22/02)
Tuscaloosa, AL
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1 posted 2002-06-23 09:30 PM


"Poems are the terrain of the mind
They are the landscape that flowers
In time frames they capture the moisture
For the renewal of humanities rebirth

As the poems are joined in the faces of history
They provide the emphasis for resilience
The renew of the ritual purification
Of the survivability of natures purpose
From the blessing of the heaven of universes"




BRAVO!!! Oh my gosh, this is wonderful and so very motivating, sweet friend, yes, poetry is what makes life fruitful and we have the music in us all, all we have to do is give for you get all you offer and in result that oasis that remains will only stretch on and like the Suez canal much more acquired wisdom will come fill to our hearts content! (smiles) This is excellent, sweet friend, I LOVE IT, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Zinsser
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since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641
Calif.
2 posted 2002-06-26 09:52 AM


In a shower of salvation
Cleansing the spirit of our time
I bow to the power of my verse
To join yours in stupendous power
Into a firestorm of meteors
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
beautiful......

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
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Tamarac Fla
3 posted 2002-06-26 09:58 AM


A very nice write and read, enjoyed.
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