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Use it or lose it. (in a poem)
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Comin' to th' rescue, and bringing this'n back to life, baby.

*kiss*

I couldn't write this before, because tender delusion sounded too Moist, so I couldn't touch it without writing Moist.

But I read back through Suicide Playground, and this is what happened... Most of the first lines of verses are taken straight out of it. Gotta love when I steal from myself, huh?

Wasn't at all creative with the title.

Check it:

Tender Delusion

i'll be waiting for you
do exactly what you're told

jm

 
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