That Kinda Love (Should Be A Crime)

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Open Poetry #20

That Kinda Love (Should Be A Crime)

Hallucination
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since 2001-03-18

Posts 419

0 posted 2002-04-14 10:29 PM

"That Kinda Love (Should Be A Crime)"
© 2002 Brian Eggertsen, All Rights Reserved

V1:
Right from day one you lead me
down a tight cold and dark ally
Where you stabbed me in the back
with your attitude just like that
No warning no signs at all
you just laughed while you watched me fall
I was filled with devotion
But you silenced my emotions

C:
That kinda love should be a crime,
Falling apart, I'm dead inside.
Why did I fall in love with you,
Dial 911, I need a clue...
(2x)

V2:
I was a man of my word
turned that against me made me hurt
I though we were gonna (love)
But you stripped my of my honor
Pushed me up against the wall
you could make my heart beg and crawl
Down on all four like a dog
you knew the password to my lock

Re-Chorus:

Bridge:
Now I'm pounding on a why
Why did I hook up with you
Why didn't I say goodbye
Why did I hide the truth
I don't know why,
I'm still pounding...On that why.

Re-chorus:

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2002-04-14 10:34 PM

"I was filled with devotion
But you silenced my emotions"

I know this part well, great write

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-04-14 10:34 PM

(big hugggsssssss) Oh Brian, my heart goes out to you, dearest friend, I too am saddened to see so any face this kind of supposed crime every day and I only wish we would have the ability to scrutinize fate and identify whether ones love is real or if they are trying to take us as a victim in heartbreaks hostage! (sigh) My heart goes out to you, sweet friend, this is an excellent song bound to be a hit, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Brian, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Hallucination
Member

since 2001-03-18

Posts 419

3 posted 2002-04-14 10:40 PM

Hey guys,
Thanks alot for your read and sweet and kind words

"Hitsong" it has a nice ring to it, well, I'm still dreaming...But hey that's a good thing. Well, thanks alot for your time!!

Best Wishes,

Brian.

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