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Words_of_Glitter
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0 posted 2002-04-14 06:58 PM


Maybe we could step outside and play in the rain all day. Hold hands and dance and let the rain rinse away all of the bad things that I never meant to say.

Or maybe we could take a walk until we're both soaked clear through and you're only drowning in all the good things I've said to you.

Or maybe we should just stay inside and feel the pain we've inflicted upon one another. Realizing that our love is almost dry and we're just stuck in an endless cycle.


"Babies in backseats cause accidents. Accidents in backseats cause babies.

[This message has been edited by Words_of_Glitter (04-14-2002 09:56 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-04-14 07:05 PM




(big hugggsssss) Oh Sarah, this is sooooo powerfully heartfelt, sweet friend, I hope you have talked over everything closely to each other and settled each others differences and now are able to feel for each other comfortably once more! (sigh) This is powerful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sarah, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2002-04-14 09:47 PM


The slings and arrows in the heat of the moment are often turned upon ourselves.
Deep and thoughtful. ThisDiamond

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3 posted 2002-04-14 10:39 PM


very emotional write....well done
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