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wayoutwalt
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0 posted 2002-04-14 09:24 PM



My skull is in a high school play
My heart is in a freezer
My kidney saved my best friend’s life
My liver - some ole geezer

My brain they shipped to Harvard Law
My lungs they sent to Yale
My gonads to a party school
Not once, I heard they failed

And all the stuff they could not use?
It's at Texas A and M
They study it both day and night
It’s all the same to them

So my soul ascends to heaven
I’m glad it wasn’t hard
To make a difference - just check yes
On your I.D./donor card!


[This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (04-14-2002 11:00 PM).]

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Victoria
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1 posted 2002-04-14 09:37 PM


Im thinking about it Walt..havent quite decided yet..enjoyed

             ~Victoria

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2 posted 2002-04-14 09:39 PM


Very well expressed Walt.
An excellent reminder done in a fun write.
Enjoyed...and the title is just perfect!
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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3 posted 2002-04-14 10:22 PM


I did
cute write Walt

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4 posted 2002-04-14 10:25 PM


Walt~
Just WONDERFUL ... and the title is PERFECT~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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5 posted 2002-04-14 10:28 PM


It's a done deal Waltie! If there is anything left after a lifetime of abuse, that is, they can have it.

As ever, you are a delight my friend. Your humor shines through, and I don't even wanna discuss your gonads!

HUGS

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6 posted 2002-04-14 10:45 PM




(giggles in delight) Ooohhhhhh...I just love the sense of humor you put in your nwonderful feelings, sweet friend, this is a wonderful overview of you in parts! (big huggsssss) I enjoy reading your words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Walter, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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7 posted 2002-04-14 10:54 PM


Oh man! Those recipients of your organs have no idea what they are in for!
wayoutwalt
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8 posted 2002-04-14 11:01 PM


love the icon sweetie... my eye is on you!


thanks all!

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