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Startime
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0 posted 2002-02-24 07:35 PM

I Dance To The Music Of Your Heart

It comes to me over the mountains
carried on eternal winds of change
Whispered softly it soars through the air
while freedom sets border of it’s range

Yearning tunes move my heart to weeping
when feeling strong notes of emotion
I move with the rhythm that’s playing,
a timeless waltz shows my devotion

Swaying to and fro within your words
as a silent songs sings in the night
Softly touched over time and distance
by the words of love that you recite

Feeling a flush of joy light my face
from visions I refuse to contain
I Dance to the music of your heart
as it fills my soul with sweet refrain

Karen Torbiak 2002 ©

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Suetang
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since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

1 posted 2002-02-24 08:12 PM

Hello Karen

Oh, this was pure heaven. Your words touched my heart and were filled with so much warmth and love......absolutely beautiful. This would have to be one of my favourites of yours.

Take care.....Sue

Suetang

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2002-02-24 08:21 PM

StarTime~
Oh my ...

'Feeling a flush of joy light my face
from visions I refuse to contain
I Dance to the music of your heart
as it fills my soul with sweet refrain'

As I sit here writing, with Bill playing his guitar and singing to me .... I know this feeling OH SO WELL~

Girl ... you just wrote MY heart~
Thankee lady~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

mirror man
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since 2001-01-08

Posts 814

3 posted 2002-02-24 08:25 PM

Yes, it's hard to imagine love without music. Enjoyed this.

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

4 posted 2002-02-24 08:29 PM

OK Lady....now just a sec...remember...I
can't dance...can't play the guitar...but
I think I found the key....(clearing my
throat).....Aw shucks... Beautiful poem
Karen...enjoyed...could feel the music..nice.

catalinamoon

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since 2000-06-03

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The Shores of Alone

5 posted 2002-02-24 08:33 PM

Loving every bit of this, Karen. So melodic.
Sandra

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

6 posted 2002-02-25 01:37 AM

Karen - you sure do write some romantic stuff. I'd take my guitar and play for you anytime, if you would sit there and listen..

BC

D.Lester Young
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since 2001-12-08

Posts 1219
Austin, Tx

7 posted 2002-02-25 01:45 AM

Music as always to my mind. Your talents is blessed with the warmth of the creator of humanity.

SEA

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since 2000-01-18

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with you

8 posted 2002-02-25 02:04 AM

always such beautiful, vivid poetry from you

monique
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since 2000-02-03

Posts 369
Louisiana

9 posted 2002-02-25 02:24 AM

O Startime
goose bump
appeared on my heart
as i was reading
your majestic words

monique

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

10 posted 2002-02-25 04:00 AM

Just lovely Karen...James

Alicethruglass
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since 2001-06-19

Posts 368

11 posted 2002-02-25 05:53 AM

a timeless waltz, how romantic. *s

rwood
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since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

12 posted 2002-02-25 07:44 AM

I love to see when people follow their heartsong..and share it with others. As beautiful as ever this sound and this verse.
Hugs!!

Sincerely,
Regina

strbbux
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since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

13 posted 2002-02-25 09:04 AM

Karen this is just beautiful, I was swaying as I read it. The feeling of movement you have captured. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

14 posted 2002-03-02 04:48 PM

mushy, I like it

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

15 posted 2002-03-02 06:46 PM

Karen, every word was lovely. Enjoyed much.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

Kethry
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since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

16 posted 2002-03-02 07:09 PM

Karen,
music love and your poetry...what a perfect combination
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

jwesley
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since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

17 posted 2002-03-02 08:46 PM

Yep, you've got it down Karen...the bug has left its mark.

jwesley

GenXer
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since 2001-12-15

Posts 583
USA

18 posted 2002-03-02 11:31 PM

Karen - Way to bring it home with that last stanza. Nicely done.

Dave

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

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USA

19 posted 2002-03-03 05:37 PM

always enjoy reading it

Madame Chipmunk
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Michigan

20 posted 2002-03-03 05:44 PM

Gorgeous words, Karen

It comes to me over the mountains
carried on eternal winds of change
Whispered softly it soars through the air
while freedom sets border of it’s range

very romantic

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

Greeneyes

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since 2000-09-09

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In Your Poetic Mind

21 posted 2002-03-04 11:03 AM

Keeeppp Dancing, this is a beauty....

"it comes over the mountain" wow what a peaceful feeling....lovely Karen~

Lauren~

Greeneyes~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

Silver Streak
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since 2002-01-02

Posts 3625
FL, USA

22 posted 2002-03-05 05:11 PM

Karen, you write so beautifully. I love your poetry. May I answer you in a poem?

Dancing with me.

I am your whistling winds that blow above
Mountains and wavy seas carrying love
A song I sing as the oblate earth spins
I bring you magic of tropical winds.

Your tears are only soft pearls of my rain
Flowing so gently down cheeks in your pain
Please give them to me as I blow through your soul
I will dry your face and you'll become whole.

So take my sunshine and skies of pure blue
As mountains of sunlight I now blow to you
So come with me, dance, let's fly the blue sky
Sing music, romance with love in your eye.

Fill up your soul with peace and good will
Embracing my wind as I teach you to trill
In Sunlight we'll savor all joy in God's sky
Loving forever as we sing on high,

Angels in chorus we join heavenly
As your soul embraces my wind and sea.

As you and your toes go dancing with me.

((Karen))
-newell

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

[This message has been edited by Silver Streak (03-05-2002 05:13 PM).]

Interloper

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since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

23 posted 2002-03-05 06:42 PM

It is the very BEST kind of dance, too

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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