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Ivy Rose
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0 posted 2002-03-03 04:04 PM



You give wings to my heart
and you say, "Fly to me."
My heart trembles at the sound
of your voice, at the moment
of your touch.My heart moves
in new stirrings...the feathered
hope, the airy delight
of being near to the one
whose heart is fluttering
back at me.I see my wings
spreading out, fanning soft, kisses
into your waiting spirit.
Through the eons of light-years,
your heart quivers in time;
and the vibrations give
my heart the momentum it needs
~~~~~to fly ~~~~~to soar.

And, then~~~~~~~~~
I offer my wings to you
and I say, "My heart
will always be yours."

© Copyright 2002 Ivy Rose - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2002-03-03 04:50 PM



Ivy Rose, what a soft, tender writing...thank you for sharing!

BluesSerenade
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2 posted 2002-03-03 07:16 PM


It is a kind of magic when flying so high.
Your words are always a special treat Ivy Rose~

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3 posted 2002-03-03 07:19 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is sooooooo lovely, sweet friend, may true love forever spread its heart wings and hold you close and have your heart flitter to eternity forever and ever! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is gorgeous! You have such a beautiful heart,l sweet Ivy, thank you for sharing!

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May love and light alwyas shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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4 posted 2002-03-03 08:13 PM


Softly felt flight. This is lovely.
Sandra

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5 posted 2002-03-03 08:46 PM


Very very beautiful Ivy Rose...as you always
seem to do..

jwesley
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6 posted 2002-03-03 10:04 PM


Very beautiful dear Ivy...one of the days I'm gonna respond to one of these lovely works by you, from  the other side of the fence - just can't seem to find the words like you do.

jwesley

JamesBowie
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7 posted 2002-03-03 10:39 PM


beautiful
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8 posted 2002-03-04 09:14 AM


Ivy darling girl this is utterly utterly gorgeous, thank you for this delicious and wonderful flight. This is utterly beautiful

As always darling girl your writing shines with the delight of your smiling heart, fabulous writing


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy


To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


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9 posted 2002-03-04 10:37 AM


Ivy Rose~

Very tender and loving....the offering of heart....nicely done...


Lauren~

Greeneyes~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

strbbux
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10 posted 2002-03-04 10:39 AM


Ivy Rose, this poem was like a sweet melody. lovely. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Silver Streak
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11 posted 2002-03-05 05:19 PM


Ivy, I just love poems about flying through the skies. And yours is simply wonderful! I believe that the sky is our real home and I just love to hang out there. And I know it is where lovers like to hang out. So when you are up there in the blue, look around. You just might see me dancing on a star, or chasing a light beam just looking for God's love. And when I see you I'll wave at you and yours. Wheee!  

((Ivy))
-newell

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher


[This message has been edited by Silver Streak (03-05-2002 05:23 PM).]

Suetang
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12 posted 2002-03-05 05:30 PM


Hello Ivy Rose

Such stunning images were portrayed through your beautiful words.

Take care....Sue

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Deep in the heart
13 posted 2002-03-05 06:31 PM


Soft and tender ... an unbeatable combination

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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