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Joyce Johnson
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0 posted 2002-01-01 03:00 PM


A year has gone by, since we first called your name
And welcomed you into each heart.
Twelve months of joy and delight in your ways,
Enamored with you from the start.

Your first smile, your first word, your first patty-cake,
These now are all part of your past.
But the wonders awaiting in your second year,
Will certainly out do the last.

Shirley Temple would have envied those dimples.
Movie stars might long for that face.
You're more beautiful by far in a diaper
Than they in their velvets and lace.

Darling Hannah in this, your very first year,
You have lived with unbridled verve.
We adore you and are wanting to bring you
The wonderful world you deserve.

By Joyce: Hannah will be one year old already on Jan 4, 2002



© Copyright 2002 Joyce I Johnson - All Rights Reserved
Kit McCallum
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1 posted 2002-01-01 03:03 PM


"You're more beautiful by far in a diaper
Than they in their velvets and lace."

Joyce, this was absolutely delightful!  What a wonderful poem to mark Hannah's first birthday. This will be treasured always, I'm sure. Just lovely!

Best wishes,
/Kit

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2 posted 2002-01-01 03:05 PM




(tears fall down my cheeks) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is soooooooo adorable and beautiful! (kiss on cheek) May your sweet Hannah grow and shine with a golden loving heart just as yours always! We all love you so much, sweet friend, CONGRATULATIONS!!! (cheers with delight) HAPPY BIRTHDAY HANNAH!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Joyce, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (01-01-2002 03:09 PM).]

Joyce Johnson
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3 posted 2002-01-01 03:17 PM


Thank you dear Kit and Noah.  As long as there are Hannahs to repopulate this world it will be a better place.  Love, Joyce
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4 posted 2002-01-01 04:16 PM


aw, thank you for sharing this with us....Joyce, this is lovely.

I am/Kathleen/

Bill Charles
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5 posted 2002-01-01 05:06 PM


Joyce - I send a very happy birthday to Hannah, and wish her well this coming year..

BC

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6 posted 2002-01-01 05:09 PM


Thanks for sharing this-- and happy birthday to hannah

There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar.
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7 posted 2002-01-02 06:47 AM


Beautiful Joyce.  My nephew was born on Jan first eighteen years ago.  Instead of writing a first year poem, it is a graduation poem for him.  This was beautiful Joyce.  *s*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

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8 posted 2002-01-02 01:27 PM


Joyce,
How utterly delightful. Babies are such a joy and a blessing. I'm immensely jealous!

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9 posted 2002-01-02 01:31 PM


*giggling delightedly* You have said it perfectly. I love it. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Joyce Johnson
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10 posted 2002-01-02 09:44 PM


Thanks to all of you.  Sh is a doll.  Love, Joyce
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