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walker
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since 2001-02-11
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0 posted 2002-01-01 10:03 PM



Your lips
so tempting
Your eyes
so blue
Your body
perfect
I ache for you
Come let me
show you
my love
I want to conquer
your passion
with desire rob
your love
And make you mine
right here
right now

© Copyright 2002 walker - All Rights Reserved
Irish Rose
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1 posted 2002-01-01 10:06 PM


walker, this ought to do it...and with that, I'm going to bed!!!!

'Fiction is the truth inside the lie.' ~Stephen King

Ivy Rose
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2 posted 2002-01-01 10:08 PM


WOW!!! That's a beautiful way of expressing your desire. I think the lady will accept.

***Ivy Rose

Jamie
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3 posted 2002-01-01 10:09 PM


Conveys the urgency very well...nice

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byron

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4 posted 2002-01-01 10:10 PM


YES!!  Oh my ...yes....

*~ Wishing everyone a New Year filled with Peace & Love ~*

Bill Charles
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5 posted 2002-01-01 10:13 PM


walker - this should do it, yup, it should do it...

BC

RosePetal
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6 posted 2002-01-01 10:16 PM


Oh I am lovin this walker! Who could resist you when you say Right here, right now?!

RP

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7 posted 2002-01-01 10:45 PM


the want is powerful, and fills one's mind with desire very nicely done!!!
1slick_lady
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8 posted 2002-01-01 10:59 PM


who could say no to be desired in this way?...helen
JamesMichael
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9 posted 2002-01-02 12:20 PM


You don't waste any time...do you?  James
Larry C
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10 posted 2002-01-02 12:46 PM


walker,
You aren't talking about a quickie, are you? LOL This seemed like more than that. Strong write, by the way. I like it!

ecrivan
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11 posted 2002-01-02 12:59 PM


The urgency is conveyed quite nicely as Jamie mentioned, hope she catches on!


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12 posted 2002-01-02 09:56 PM




(sigh) You are sooooooooo romantic, sweet friend, you have these pages swooning with your happiness of true love! (smiles) May he forever be yours and share a love with you so heavenly! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is sooooooo gorgeous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Walker, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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