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Pleasure Island |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Pleasure Island By: Noah Eaton 11/21/01 Hop aboard the Good Ship Unicorn Together we’ll dance on Sweetheart Lagoon’s shores Under these bell-bottomed starry skies We’ll dance about in the scattering spotlight You look so dazzling in your bikini Your skin is lathered in the sweetest dreams Sip your fruit smoothie and sing with me Here on Pleasure Island, where lovers dance free Smooth hymns of courtship jazz sway in the canopy Lay with me on the sand of this amethyst beach Running my fingers through your angel hair, drenched in pina coloda juice Ooohhhhhhhh, how your lips taste so sweet, how you look so cute The disco ball moon reveals her smile Muffling your cozy body close to me Gypsy flies parachute from coconut nests Dolphins cry to this happiness we transcend Together we’ll share this magic honeymoon Wedded as one in the belvedere of Sweetheart’s Lagoon You are my angelic bride Who I will always kiss to sleep every night |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Come take me away, I'm waiting for you! Let me be the first to tell you how lovely this piece is! I can't help but smile as I read each line....gorgeous! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
YUMMY!! Love it Noah! You must have had a great vacation!!  ~hugs, Nancy~~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Sounds like this would be quite a romantic honeymoon in sweethearts lagoon...James |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
Fantastic write! I sincerely enjoyed it Noah. Sweet, loving, gentle and caring. Yet full of adventure!  Keep it up. We're better of for your poetry.Sincerely, Titus |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
Noah, As always a beautiful write.I can see the imagery all too well. Peaches |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Sounds like my place of dreams. Beautifully visual. Sandra |
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