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Carol Lina Member
since 2001-11-18
Posts 94USA |
Tongues rain down on wind speak softly to me. Be a presence long denied, accompany my soul. I am turning, a pirouette toppled beneath exhausted will. I whisper tongues rain down on wind speak softly to me. Through the storm- infuse color give me something to hold onto give to me…. to me. One moment, one fine moment Pour down paraphrasing truths, come, allow me to enter into a place deep- a wellspring. I pray tongues rain down on wind speak softly to me. For the voice is gone- all is silent. Lilies died. Leaves fell. Snow will melt, ice will freeze but my tears turned to rosewater when bitter turned to grace and cried.... Tongues rain down on wind speak softly to me…. Carolina [This message has been edited by Carol Lina (edited 11-24-2001).] |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
This is very beautiful even though is sad. Great poem. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
What a blessed understanding of how we hear voices...of the past, of the future, of our inner soul... this is a Keeper... |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Beautiful words written with style, thanks for sharing. Regards, Olias. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Carolina, this is very lovely. I do enjoy your poems a lot. Thanks. Sandra |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Thanks for this brilliant keeper! Love it! ~hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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