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Do The Spirits Weep For Me ?
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Do The Spirits Weep For Me ? |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Do The Spirits Weep For Me ? ~*Marge Tindal*~  Between two worlds they exist meandering in and out of my thoughts Struggling to get me to recognize the need of why they come Spirits of the ancient past reaching out to my mortal existence trying to get my attention While I envy them their freedom to move about at-will I recognize that they choose to return with messages to inform me of visions that were written in the legends of their earthly time meant to be shared~ The pathway to eternity is open to them yet they linger in my world I've mourned their leaving Do they mourn their going, so much that they want to come and share what they've seen ? I have cried for the loss of their mortal souls wondering if their spirits weep for mine, The very mankind of me tells me it is so~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Marge, this gave me chills, made me think of those spirits wandering. You are an angel amongst those spirits Marge......Wonderful.  On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
This...this is when you write best, and I like your new title, this is the first time I've noticed it...Ron's been busy...he never expected so much, from so many... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
This is lovely Marge...James |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
I'm sure they do Marge....beautifully done.  God bless America, my home sweet home. |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
For every tear they shed for thee, nods are exchanged among them for what you do and how you do it. Walk in pride, Willow White Feather, for you do them no dishonor by the choose of you. May your fire always burn low and bright to bring the ones from the dark..very gentle smile |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Marge, I am sure they aren't 'struggling to get me to recognize the need of why they come'. Beautiful. Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
ohhhhhhh Marge how beautiful penned. Love it, and a thread to my library. (((Hugs))) Charisma ~*TMP*~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GentleSpirit~ I am but the vessel into which they *gift* the pouring of the tokens of yesteryear~ LadyInWhite~ Thank you ... I know you enjoy it when the spirits walk into my inkwell~ Thank you~ The Seraphic was from Ron for 20,000 posts ... He IS DA MAN~  JamesMichael~ Thank you, my friend~ Elizabeth~ Thanks so much sweetie~ Logan~ You just know ... and I like that~ Thank you for walking with me~ Dee~ Well ... sometimes, 'they' have to slow me down to sit and listen~ Today was one of those days~ Thank you so much~ Charisma~ Means the world to me to know you enjoyed it~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
So glad I went digging for this...and I can't say whether or not the spirits weep for you, but I suspect they laugh alot at me!  Beautifully written and presented me m.o.m.!  |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge--my thanks to Serenity for bringing this back up...seems I haven't been very attentive..and, what Logan said. Love to you, sweet sis! |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Oh my gosh...I don't know how I managed to miss this one. This wonderful poem touches the soul of us all. Absolutely magnificent. Tears flowed from my eyes as I read this almost as if I could feel spirits around me who weep for all mankind. BRILLIANT!!! I am keeping this one. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Gosh, I almost missed this one sweet Marge. Spirits weep for you Not in sadness but in joy Soulmates as you are TitiaA rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Nice one Marge, your spirits impart wisdom and truth and there are no tears in that, much enjoyed, thank you. Regards, Olias. |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
you have that magic about you, this is beautiful Marge.... Lauren~ |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh my, quite a fascinating and mystical story. Very beauiful. Sandra |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Serenity~ There is to be much laughter - after the tears~ *Hugs* to you~ Martie~ Love to you too, sweetest sister~ That Logan makes it all make sense, ya' know? StarTime~ To move one to tears is to feel that the poet has truly passed on the message~ Thank you~ Titia~ I just LOVE your reply~ Thank you, dearest lady~ OLIAS~ I appreciate your reply more than you could know~ GreenEyes~ Thank you my friend ... The 'magic' is in listening while they come~ Catalina~ Quite a true story of the 'tellings' ... The spirits bring *gifts* that I am to give to others~ Thank you for allowing me to share with you~ *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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