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{{{ Bathe in my Tears }}}
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{{{ Bathe in my Tears }}} |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
{{{ Bathe in my Tears }}} Here I stand….. Before you My tears plenty As if I have gathered them all To spill them before you Yes They are here Stand and bathe in them Step from behind the boundaries Of this limited flesh And see the being who Gave forth This outpouring. See the skies That tormented Its lands With floods of rain See me Praying endlessly For it to end And not come again Bathe in my tears As they slowly drop Come close Rub your cheek with mine And feel the dropping of tears So sublime Taste them as they reach you Know how much they are full Of woe Perhaps they’d tell you What you should know Count them with your own breath Let them teach you the way To breathe Under a torrent of endless rain Wash your face with their precious drops let them flood your eyes perhaps you’d see how much they are So full of me Let them paint your every vision With all the colors they hide Tell you the story Of the other side And as they glide silently And dissolve within you Let them give you a taste Of the aching soul within That stands so erect Through and through Bathe in my tears Stretch your hands And rub these tears Along Every part of you Let them tell you how much They are true And when you finish This unearthly cleansing bath of pain stretch your hand again wait for my perfumed rain to flood you again and make you forever whisper my name ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Thank you |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh, this is sadly beautiful. And we are all crying now, I think. Sandra |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MyEnchantedMelody~ Tenderly, delicately ... lovely~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
my friend. . . truly. . . you have penned a work of art. . . that touches the heart. . . and speaks to the soul. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
~~Sandra~~ Yes we are....perhaps in different ways. Thank you dearest.....I miss you and will email you soon... {{{hugs}}} ------------------------ ~~Marge~~ I guess I needed that hug as I wrote this....  Thank you as always....  and warm {{hugs}} to you ----------------------- ~~Sven~~ and I wouldn't ask for a higher prize than touching the heart and speaking to the soul....especially if it is of poets as yourself....  Thank you dear friend ***************************** |
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Moonlight Romeo
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
When I read this, I'm taken away. Your words are very well done, and come from the heart. Thank you for sharing them. MR What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun. |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
Wash your face with their precious drops let them flood your eyes perhaps you’d see how much they are So full of me Let them paint your every vision With all the colors they hide Tell you the story Of the other side You wrote this so well..it is a poem to be read over and over again to understand all the meanings within it. It is also very true. |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
Moonlight Romeo May the moon always shine its silver light on you..... & yes..I wrote it from the heart....the heart of me. Thank you for your kind words..... ------------------ Songbird I'm glad that you feel that way about it.... Thank you dearly for your comment.... *********************** |
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