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Topheth
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since 2001-09-08
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0 posted 2001-09-25 12:41 PM



I wish for time, for moments to breathe; these days pile up like bricks on my chest.  There are many wonderful posts here that slip past my eye, people who write such beautiful words.  If I even tried to name those that came to mind I would still forget someone, regret something.  So to each, I've enjoyed what you've shared, treasured what you've bared and I hope my tide changes soon.  Continue on, leave this delicious trail of breadcrumbs, I will catch up again.  And now something for those of brown eyes and blue eyes and green eyes and two eyes... you know who you are.    




O Gentle Rose


You once found,
I should never lose.
May you be lasting as the moon
and stay precious as a rose.
I admire your kind manners
and the generous, honorable quality
you so embody.
Hear how your voice is soft,
sweet and whisperish;
it is an excellent thing.
You are a woman
special of any devotion.
May you be mother to your children
and lover to your companion
with all the understanding
life has given you.
A fine lady like you is hard to hide
for you radiate the essence
of your very soul.
May I hold on right to you
as a gentle rose.


- Jephrey


[This message has been edited by Topheth (edited 09-25-2001).]

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Janet Marie
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1 posted 2001-09-25 01:22 AM


You once found,
I should never lose.
May you be lasting as the moon
and stay precious as a rose.
=================================
May I hold on right to you
as a gentle rose.
==================================

absolutely stunning........
poetry in motion.
jm

Well tomorrow holds only mystery
And who's to say what might be
But in you I found a love so strong
The sun and the moon looked on in jealousy

SEA
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with you
2 posted 2001-09-25 01:42 AM


........yes...........you may  

wow, this is such a tender write......
there are women all over the world now with melted hearts   *sigh* I like this very much  

Midnitesun
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Gaia
3 posted 2001-09-25 02:18 AM


You say the days pile up like bricks on your chest, and yet the words that escape from your heart are like fragrant rosebuds.  
Dee
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Posts 2330
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4 posted 2001-09-26 06:26 AM


Such a soft romantic soul you are, Topheth. This is so beautiful it takes my breath away. I will have to keep this one I think.

Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life.     a brand

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
5 posted 2001-09-26 09:00 AM



Nothing for red eyes, except a lovely read....

very well done, Sir!

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
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6 posted 2001-09-26 09:16 AM


So extemely beautiful.  My green eyes fill with mist from such beauty, more beautiful than a rose.  Hugs.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

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