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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Reasoning Once while resting, musing, Mugging flowers, juggling clouds I watched a bee taking honey That flew straight way to a hive and Buzzed and did the weirdest jive. Bobbing up and down, suspended Till his gorge was near upended. Directions to a field of plenty Shallow wiggles, steps, and stroll Then disappeared into the hole. A throng flew out like piranha Stripped the field of nectars manna Making honey, just like money Until they cleaned the very source. Done without the slightest remorse. Struck me odd when in compare to Ways that our humanity dare. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
So this is where the saying "busy as a bee" comes from.... Well done our Sy! |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
"Thar's gold in them thar hills" will stir the buzz of all communal be(e)ings. Enjoyed. "Oh what a tangled web we weave when first we practice to decieve" |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Smart little buzzin' buggers aren't they? I love this, Sy...  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
A throng flew out like piranha Stripped the field of nectars manna Making honey, just like money Until they cleaned the very source. Done without the slightest remorse. Struck me odd when in compare to Ways that our humanity dare. ==================================== youre so COOL...what a very groovy write... you've been eating wisdom rice again, havent ya  Did I ever tell ya I love honey in me raspberry tea LOL BEEutiful poem Sy-babes *WW*  mewont you sing me your poetry |
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wpwpoet Member
since 2001-07-25
Posts 99 |
yeah they know the flowers will give again. if only we could learn that lesson. peace love and understanding...wpwpoet truely it is "grooovy" |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, Thanks for the well done. *L* RSWells, Glad you enjoyed. Nan, Love when you read me, LOL *L* Wpwpoet, Thanks for the groovy. JM, I'll be the honey in your tea anytime. Winkiewinkie Stinky |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Great verse. I enjoy watching them too. They are on a mission aren't they. Delightful read. Sincerely, Regina |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Oh, this was great! Those little bees are much like us in many ways, aren't they?  All writing comes |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
As above, so below... -MVS "It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself." |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy--To see the bee like thee I wish for me |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Mark, True , thank you. Martie, Thank you dear poetess. |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
You kept me buzzing about with the rhyme scheme Sy ... I loved this, from internal rhymes to ending rhymes, wonderful flow throughout, well done! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ You've BEEn seen buzzing ? Love the thought~  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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