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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2001-07-17 03:41 PM


Sad Song


I'm singing
life's sad song
now that my
sweetheart's gone.


Jameslee@July17,2001

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1 posted 2001-07-17 03:45 PM


reminds me of a blues verse... wrote or attempted to write a few blues verses myself once upon a time.. this one I can hear... BB singing...

Nice..


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2 posted 2001-07-17 09:22 PM


JamesMichael~
Short, sad song~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Paula Finn
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3 posted 2001-07-18 12:34 PM


Double hugs to you
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4 posted 2001-07-18 10:39 AM


enjoy
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5 posted 2001-07-18 10:44 AM





well done


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