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Tired Of The Road
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Tired Of The Road |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Tired Of The Road I'm stuck in a time When the roads are to busy When everythings just an Overpass, exit mess I've lost my map And forgot my destination All the cars are starting to pass My gauge has been on E For far to long But I never seem to quite Run out of gas I'm tired of going in Endless circles I feel like I'm going To crash Connie McDonald Copyright@2001 [This message has been edited by Zinsser (edited 07-16-2001).] |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Pull over... have a cup of coffee... relax... relax... we don't want you to crash.. honestly we don't... Nice writing... I enjoyed |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Maybe it's time for a hike in the mountains or a walk on the beach...? A change of scenery in a way that can be taken-in and appreciated rather than as a blur through peripheral vision on the other side of a bug-splattered windshield... -MVS "When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said." |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Sometimes it seems like our lives are running us--maybe it's time to take the scenic route?  I could relate to this. |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Cpat: Oh how I enjoy a good cup of coffee... Thanks For Reading! Mark: The Luxury of a walk along the beach... Ocean withdrawal going on LOL Serinity: Love the name btw. Yes Life has been running me But it's looking up.... I just want it all fixed... Yesterday LOL Thanks to All... Thank You |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
serenity's perception of this is what I thought was the crux of it it's good that you're not ever quite running out of gas, though, I would guess all of us have some times when we think we're about to crash but somehow, we go on |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
Tired of the road...... We all seem to get that feeling every now and then... This is a piece many can certainly relate to... Thank you ************************ It's only me.......only me |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
VAS: Yes.. Thanks for reading... Enchanted: If anyone can relate to anything I write I'm Humbled Thanks |
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