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walker
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since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240
Florida

0 posted 2001-07-17 06:07 PM



Outside
lips apart
tasting
exploring
searching
conquering our love.
Inside
bodies dancing
moving
pleasuring
touching
Locking in our love
Within
life begins
miraculously
strong
vulnerable
materializing our love.

© Copyright 2001 walker - All Rights Reserved
Irish Rose
Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263

1 posted 2001-07-17 07:03 PM


You know, it's been about 90 degrees here in Indianapolis today but this makes it seem much hotter  

"It's easier to kill love than to nurture it" Fred Hardesty

Kathleen

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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369
Deep in the heart
2 posted 2001-07-17 07:23 PM


I love it ... LOVE it!  Well writ!

ThUnDeRkYsS
Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727
Wisconsin
3 posted 2001-07-17 10:51 PM


Very nice indeed  

Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer.



JLR
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since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785

4 posted 2001-07-17 11:51 PM


walker---Maybe you should write 'specialty' greeting cards.  Good one!
Zinsser
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since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641
Calif.
5 posted 2001-07-18 12:31 PM


New life created from love....
speechless....
tearfull...
wonderous....

           Thank You
         ~~~Connie~~~

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