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sad brown eyes Junior Member
since 2001-12-14
Posts 19Connecticut U.S |
My heart was healing and my head was clearing. My first love i was forgetting. I told myself again and agian, dont trust someone until they hold your hand. But my head didnt listen and the hand wasnt there. So again i trusted someone who left me standing here, with an empty hand. I thought i would never do this again. I just dont understand. Why me? I dont understand why my hands are always left empty. renee |
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[Ice Box] Junior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 21Canada |
 Trust is a hard thing to keep and to earn. We, as humans, tend to break them more than we keep them. Your use of "hands" is a symbol of trust, and you kept that theme throughout. It was very appropriate in this case, and it really brought in more than just "hands". It brought in expression. *Thinks* "I dont understand why my hands are always left empty." We don't understand a lot of things, mainly because we're a bunch of brainless monkies. *laugh* But really, I don't think you should try to understand. Just see it as a part of life, and everything will seem less confusing. Although, just don't let these experiences keep you from being who you are, because what you want is not only someone you can trust, but also someone who loves the true you. Best of luck! [Ice Box] Chill. [This message has been edited by [Ice Box] (edited 12-14-2001).] |
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Alyssa
since 2001-05-30
Posts 385IM ENGAGED!!!!! |
  WELCOME!!!!!!!!!! hehe i liked this poem and i kinda know how this goes..hope to see bunchies more! [This post has been created by Alyssa, be joyous she has graced you with her pressence!!!] |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!!! I enjoyed this poem a lot...its nice to have you join us here and i hope to see more from you in the near future Welcome again!!!ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd.. [This message has been edited by xShUgArHiGhx (edited 12-15-2001).] |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
You're always going to want to understand why. The question of why will rest on your lips until your dying day. Whether it's love, hate, loss, success, friendship, failure... anything. And the best way to find what you're looking for? Listen to yourself. Seriously. Hush your mind and your mouth and listen... let the answers roll over you like a flood. When you learn to listen, you will learn to understand. However, until that day comes.. don't let it trouble you so. Keep your head up and an open mind, for you never know what you may find. Welcome to Passions.. you started out wonderfully. I hope to see your art here again. The only thing that I fear is to die quietly. jaimespoetry.blogspot.com [This message has been edited by Dark Enchantress (edited 12-15-2001).] |
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fozzyozzy Member
since 2001-03-15
Posts 336Lessburg Virginia |
I liked this poem, it seemed very...deliberate(I don't really know what that means so don't ask me  )A Nice way to start your hopefully long stay here. "and Death i think is no paranthesis"-e.e. cummings |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Welcome Welcome Welcome Welcome to passions for poetry Glad to see you decided to join our family of friends I hope you do enjoy this place as much as we all do So, happy reading and posting too You poem shows so much pain Don't worry, your special someone will arrive The only problem is, we never know when One day your hand will be forver holding someone elses thanks for sharing là où est mon amour? |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
Nicely said IceBox. Titus |
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