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Zsolt New Member
since 2001-02-16
Posts 7Belgium |
Your Dreams Do you dream of the future, And believe it will come true, And that things you've dreamed of Will eventually work out for you? Because with all my heart and soul I can only wish you do, And that in return You wish the same for me too. Forget all the pain, It's nice things you should treasure, Try to colour your life purple, And live it for your own pleasure. I know it's not easy, Being you may be harder than it seems. That's why today is about you. You and those dreams. ---------------------------- Long time no see! Well, I've only posted 2 of my poems here some months ago, so you probably don't remember. Life sure didn't stop here on the forum(it shouldn't). I'm probably not going to post here more often than before, but I'll be reading them. Ok, this is a poem I wrote for my best friend, for her birthday. It's simple, but it speaks for itself. P.S.:you should know her favourite colour is purple.  [This message has been edited by Zsolt (edited 12-11-2001).] |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
i liked this one a lot...i think everyone needs a day for themselfes ya kno?? nicely done ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd.. |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
"Forget all the pain, It's nice things you should treasure, Try to colour your life purple, And live it for your own pleasure." That is such a great message. If only we could all do this. The world would be a much better place. I do remember your writing. I'm actually going to go and look at it now. Thanks for sharing another piece. Keep writing! ~AF~ "Always keep focus on your dreams because most often than not that's all you'll have." - Javier |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
nice poem... please do a spell check, tho'... btw, I was just wondering, why you do not intend to post more poems, more often... Regards, sudhir |
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Zsolt New Member
since 2001-02-16
Posts 7Belgium |
Thanks for the positive reactions. ~AF~: I'm glad you remembered and I hope you liked the other poems as well. Thanks! I may change my mind and post more often, but it's really just a small hobby for me, nothing serious. I'm busy working for college too, so that too makes it difficult. Anyway, thanks again for welcoming me back! |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
"Try to colour your life purple, And live it for your own pleasure" i like this one bunches...i loved that line...sometimes brightening up your own life yourself gives you more pleasure then someone doing it for you. im sure your friend liked this one lots. nice tohave you back |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Let's not forget that we still have to act upon our dreams You've shown your heart in this post How you care about others and their lives wonderful post là où est mon amour? |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
Wonderful post Z. I loved it. It was clearly, and cleanly written. It had a frame work, and, honestly, a lovely ending. 'specially the last line! Good luck with college, eh? Titus |
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