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Who Are We? |
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CwboyAtHeart Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 541Selah, WA, USA 
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This is yet another poem that I wrote in English class, just looking around at the people in the class and thinking about whether or not everybody truly knows who we all are. Anyway, let me know what you think of this one, I don't think it's very good and it's a rather odd format, but what the heck. lol  WHO ARE WE? Who am I? Who are you? Who are we when we're us? Masks are all we seem to be I often wonder Do you, too? If we really are Who we want to be And if we were Would they still care? Would they still love us For who we really are? Or do they love us For the masks we wear And who they want us to be - Cody - |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
this is so interesting. i often wonder what it's meant to be "us" and the various masks we wear. it'd be stunning - emotionally- if you woke up one day and just realised you were in love with someones mask and not the real person themselves. good job cody. made me think...  |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
These are very good questions..questions i'd love to be answered..nicely done ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd.. |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
the format was a little differesnt and that made it interesting. these are hard questions to answer, i think everyone asks them and no one knows the answers. Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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Honey Member
since 2001-10-09
Posts 92Hot girl From Canada |
Very interesting format. I truly liked this one. It got straight to the point. I think to a certain extent not everbody knows who they really are. They just have to wait to find out. It Feels As If I've Always Been Someone On The Outside Looking In. |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
Damn. Nice Poem. Titus |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
Well said Honey... |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Wow...nice poem very well writtenkeep up the great work. Lauren "I just needed someone to talk to you were just to busy with yourself."-Staind |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
You should always show your true self Let people love you for who you are from the very beginning Masks is what complicate things là où est mon amour? |
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