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Ree Ree
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since 2001-06-28
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0 posted 2001-12-10 07:13 PM


Pardon me sir, can you tell me
why the world has left me here?
'Cause I saw you standing there,
and I know that you don't care,
but I can't help but hope that
the answer's in you somewhere.

Pardon me miss, can you tell me
on which road shall I walk now.
'Cause I'm suppose to move on
and don't know how
and you look like you've been here before
and were once like me, but not anymore.

Pardon me little girl, can you tell me
what am I to do
now that I'm alone like you.
'Cause I'm waiting here just to meet,
here where the sidewalk abruptly meets the street,
that fate I've tried so hard to beat.

Pardon me god, can you please explain
why my life is just now so insane.
'Cause I thought you were supppose to know
and be there so that you could show
where exactly I should go

I guess you don't even know....



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with you
1 posted 2001-12-10 10:37 PM


God does know honey, he just can't give you the answers... you have to find them....he just guides us along with that voice in your heart....listen....he is there....it sounds to me like you are at a blind corner of life...those aren't scary, so much as they are an adventure   The answers do come, when they are meant to. (((hugs))) if you need someone to talk to who has been there, just email me   I liked this poem very much, and remember too easy how this felt....  
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2 posted 2001-12-11 09:52 AM


So many questions...the answers will come in good time. The instant you stop looking for them is when they will appear.

Thanks for posting. I enjoyed the read.  

~AF~

"Always keep focus on your dreams because most often than not that's all you'll have." - Javier

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3 posted 2001-12-21 12:36 PM


Oh believe me He knows......
Don't you ever think that you are actually on your right path
Yes, there might be bumps and bruises
But life is never easy
Think about that

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?
Nelly Furtado é a menina a mais bonita no mundo largo do todo.


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tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs
4 posted 2001-12-21 01:27 PM


This was a very interesting poem...i think it was extremely unique and VERY well written! nicely done...great job!

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

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