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sweetlilangel
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since 2001-12-05
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0 posted 2001-12-16 08:56 AM


I never saw this comming
you pulled the wool over my eyes
I thought you were mr perfect.
but your personality lied.
I thought things would always be good
Now i see it wasn't me you wanted it was her in deed.
I'll forgive you then forget as i should have long ago.
This time i'm letting you know.
I know what you are doing
You are playing me and her for a fool.
You wont get away with it though
I can't believe i didn't see this comming
It's as if you blind folded me.
You blind folded me into thinking i was the one you wanted no she
Oh well it's over goodbye my dear.
Dont forget i'll love you forever but i'm letting you go........

Don't be sad because it's over smile because it happened!

© Copyright 2001 Cassi - All Rights Reserved
Spine Grinder
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since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...
1 posted 2001-12-16 11:43 AM


awwwww   cassi.....

~If u luv something, let it go,if it comes back 2 u, its urs, if it doesnt, it never wuz..~DMX

anonymousfemale
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797
Limbo
2 posted 2001-12-16 03:57 PM


Ugh, I can't believe a guy would do this to you. Males are idiots. Plain and simple.   Well...not all of them but just the specific types.  

I hope things look up for you soon. The piece expressed your anger and sadness well.

Thanks for sharing.

~AF~

"I don't think we should have to face all of our fears in one life." - Kevin, Seachange

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Twilight Zone
3 posted 2001-12-21 12:30 PM


Well, guys like this don't deserve your attention at all
I hope his lies do finally catch up to him
You seem to take things so graciously
That is a very good thing

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?
Nelly Furtado é a menina a mais bonita no mundo largo do todo.


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tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs
4 posted 2001-12-21 01:28 PM


I never saw this comming
you pulled the wool over my eyes
I thought you were mr perfect.
but your personality lied.

I hate when you perceive someone to be something different then they really are..its such a dissapointment!! Great poem you expressed yourself nicely!

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

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