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Danielle
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0 posted 2001-12-01 10:06 AM


I have so many fears for the coming years
Will I survive this thing called high school?
Will I go to a good college?
Will me and my friends keep in touch?
Will I find my Mister or Misses Right?
Will I be right?
Or will I be poor?
As long as I am happy will it even matter?
Will I live to be old?
Or shall I die young?
So many fears for the coming years
I don't really know what to do
Will I drive a Benz?
Or will I park it on the bus?
Will I dine on lobster and shrimp?
Or will I have fast food from Mickey D's?
The coming years instill so many fears
But I guess I'll have to wait and see
What really is to become of me

Blessed Be Those Who
Reads My Writing

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Streen
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1 posted 2001-12-01 10:09 AM


This is a time of many fears when you're nearing the end of high school. Good luck in the future and good luck with your poetry! You've already got a great head start. ^_^

-Derek

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2 posted 2001-12-02 12:15 PM


Ahh.. many questions.  That's to be expected, but if you ever find the answers, be sure to email me.
I really liked the format of this poem.  The way each line was a question was a good way to approach this.  Nicely done  

--Marie

If there's one thing I've learned, it's that the most frustrated people in the world are those who know they're stupid, but keep trying anyway.

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3 posted 2001-12-03 01:43 PM


We all face these questions at one point in our lifes or another...i hope that your questions are answered for you...most of mine havent been but then again thats life

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

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