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Chel
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0 posted 2001-11-26 10:26 AM



I sit at home
I hear the phone ring
It's you
You want to come over
So of course I let you

I am so happy to see you
I hardly let you speak
I was afraid of the words I was about to hear
You say that it's over
I can't believe it

I tell you to get out
As you walk away things don't look so good anymore
You say you're sorry
I am sorry to is all I can manage to say

What more do you want
You've ruined my life
As I let you walk away...

"True friends stab you in the front."
"You are special and unique in your own way." "Your FAITH is all you need"

© Copyright 2001 Michelle Y. Plocinik - All Rights Reserved
Lisa_bebe15
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1 posted 2001-11-26 10:41 AM


I liked that..If you have AIM IM me at LisaPigtails100 and I would like to talk to you..Great Poem!

"Water Over Matter"

DawnG
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2 posted 2001-11-26 01:06 PM


Chel,

This is something that I almost let happen to me, but I am struggling every day not to let it happen.

                                  Dawn

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3 posted 2001-12-01 12:45 PM


it's always hard to go thru this
just stay strong and keep you chin up

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?


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4 posted 2001-12-01 03:58 PM


It's a tough situation, indeed.  Something that's hard for anyone to get over.  But stay strong... *hug*
Nice work, I enjoyed this one.  And look forward to more.

--Marie

If there's one thing I've learned, it's that the most frustrated people in the world are those who know they're stupid, but keep trying anyway.

TopGunLauren
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California
5 posted 2001-12-01 09:32 PM


It's hard to go through what you have but sooner or later you will move on and things will get better.But I like this piece you express yourself well keep up the great work.
  Lauren

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6 posted 2001-12-03 01:37 PM


This is so sad...im so sorry that this happened hun...::hugs::

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

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