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Poet Unknown
Member

since 2001-08-14

Posts 140
Missouri

0 posted 2001-08-14 01:05 PM

I long for the warmth of days gone by,
Cause inside my heart does slowly die.
Remembering the days when everything was fine,
Those days were simply devine.
Now they're memories in time,
And it's a bitter tasting bit of lime.
As the seasons roll by and change,
The love I have for you grows stronger and wider in range.
Wonder if you notice or if you won't see,
Exactly what you mean to me.
Because my love for you,
Will last for all eternity.

Only darkness falls on those without souls

keoni
Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 850
Up in the mountains in the NFC

1 posted 2001-08-14 02:39 PM

I liked this one alot.Good flow and really nice. This was a very good piece.
Jon

"Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine
"Only God can judge me" Tupac Shakur

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

2 posted 2001-08-14 05:18 PM

I liked this... I thought it was very sweet, and the rhyme was well done. The thoughts you have here and beautiful... nicely done, Kyle! I enjoyed this.

--Marie

You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning.

zarina
Member

since 2001-05-19

Posts 180

3 posted 2001-08-14 05:23 PM

what to say..hm. it's nice. and it's sweet. yet a little sad. great rhyme.

I am always myself. Isn't that enough for you?

Spice
Senior Member

since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

4 posted 2001-08-15 06:34 PM

The flow was a bit off, but It still went pretty well. Another well done write here. So bitter sweet.

You wouldn't worry about what people thought about you if you knew how seldom they did.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

5 posted 2001-09-04 01:11 PM

Well done here. I truly did like this poem. Very nicely written.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

cherish
Senior Member

since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

6 posted 2001-09-05 12:45 PM

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww this was really sweet kyle. i liked this one very much! good job here!

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~*brittt*~
Member

since 2001-05-09

Posts 76
East Haddam, CT

7 posted 2001-09-05 09:27 AM

Wow. This is really really great. I haven't been here for a while, but this is the first poem I read when I got here. What a way to start me off. I love it!! Keep up the good work!
~britt~

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