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Allstaria22
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0 posted 2001-05-19 10:09 PM


my friend
you bring me here
to this place of discontent
where I value you
yet want so much more
where I give you
all the soul I can
I want so much to be with you
as more than we are
to kiss your lips
to be held with in your arms
to give you everything
alone I wait here
in this place
half way between
the best friend
and the girl friend
wondering
which way will I choose?

Isaiah 1:18

"Everybody loves a rose, will you be thankful for the thorns?" -All Together Seperate

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2001-05-19 10:15 PM


humm...sounds like a recent motion picture....and yet....art always imitates life, yes?

Enjoyed....

JLR
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2 posted 2001-05-20 12:03 PM


Such a difficult, in between place to be sometimes...choose well!
rosepetals25
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3 posted 2001-05-20 04:12 AM


Allstaria,

      What a frustrating place to be! I have been there and it isn't easy. I wish you the best of luck.
      And welcome to Passions I hope you love it as much as I do

TaraB

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4 posted 2001-05-20 11:55 AM


Fantastic, what a really lovely dilemma.  I think true, real friendship should be a prerequisite to love.
Temptress
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5 posted 2001-05-20 08:16 PM


Sometimes the best and most rewarding route in the end is the friendship. They will always appreciate the treasure longer. Or..so has been my experience.   I loved this.
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