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Open Poetry #13

Your Love Shall Go On

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

0 posted 2001-04-18 11:29 PM

Your Love Shall Go On
By: Noah Eaton
4/15/01

Everyday my heart cries in Your tragic loss
Imagining how much more beautiful this world could be
If You were King in our reality, speaking forth the universal remedies
It is a pity to see You gone, see love and hate struggling

It breaks my heart when I see You bleeding in vision
Watching You cry as Your cheeks swell up, weeping for mercy
Shouting out to your disciples to love on, never lose faith
As You scream in pain, watching Your eyes twinkle with Your Father’s light

How with that last little energy You came back to spread Your knowledge
Fastening the greatest love to your friends before You disappeared
How You only needed just a little more time to sort all of peace out
So close to unifying eternal love to all, and never again would we have to fear

But fear not, we have Your message, enveloped within our hearts
Your voice shall ring on, only crescending in every fateful heartbeat
Venge we may Your dreams, seek thy chalice of eternal wine
That we may drink together, as may the heavens answer in waking harmony

Until we meet again, I shall not sleep in vain, I shall not falter upon the sea of lies
As I will deliver on Your message with Your honor
I shall see to it that Love can again forage this bountiful blue world with all my friends
I hail to you my Highness, Your love is never over

Your love shall go on, dearest Lamb Of God
Our hearts must they beat on, either the sun rises or sets
For deep in my prayers, I so solely believe
That You are here every moment to stay, guiding us all to divine merit

Alan
Senior Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

1 posted 2001-04-18 11:39 PM

Great Job Noah...wonderful message and a great read

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2001-04-19 06:19 PM

Excellent writing Noah...James

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

3 posted 2001-04-19 06:24 PM

Thank you Noah, for a vivid interpretation of the old, old, message. Joyce

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