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Mabel A. Dilley
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since 2001-03-17

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Seattle, WA, USA

0 posted 2001-04-09 04:35 PM

seated ball in hand
amidst a storm of yellow
another child blooms

Graphics: picture.com
Music: Four Seasons
Large E Pianissimo Sempre

"I am not now that which I have been."

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-04-09 04:39 PM

love the photo and the Haiku is perfect

SEA

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

2 posted 2001-04-09 05:35 PM

Right on! BRAVO!

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

Waseem Cheema
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since 2001-03-16

Posts 369
Pakistan

3 posted 2001-04-09 05:51 PM

Very COOOOOOOOOL.

I love to nice poetry.

Doug Pretorius
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since 2001-04-08

Posts 81
Ontario, Canada

4 posted 2001-04-09 05:53 PM

Excellent! The poem and picture are so perfectly suited. I've never been very good at haiku, so my hat is off to you and your talent.

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

5 posted 2001-04-09 05:58 PM

Oh you know you got my heart on this don't you - perfect in every way, kudos my friend!

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

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6 posted 2001-04-09 06:21 PM

Beautiful!!!

Mabel A. Dilley
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since 2001-03-17

Posts 859
Seattle, WA, USA

7 posted 2001-04-09 07:06 PM

It was hard for this poet to pass up an opportunity to bring spring flowers, the growth of children and Vivaldi all together. Thank you so much for enjoying and commenting. ~Shalom. Julian

"I am not now that which I have been."

Just A Woman
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since 2001-03-10

Posts 507

8 posted 2001-04-19 02:21 PM

Melted my heart...........just beautifully!

You did the picture justice. I applaud!

"I can't remember if I'm the good twin or the evil one."

Mabel A. Dilley
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since 2001-03-17

Posts 859
Seattle, WA, USA

9 posted 2001-04-19 02:45 PM

Just A Woman: thank you so much for reading and enjoying.

"I am not now that which I have been."

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

10 posted 2001-04-19 03:08 PM

Julian~
Melting this mommy's heart~
Adorably done.
Thank you sooooo much for this lovely piece.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Fading Away

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since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

11 posted 2001-04-19 04:08 PM

Interesting... very beautigul work.

--Marie

subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart.

Mabel A. Dilley
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since 2001-03-17

Posts 859
Seattle, WA, USA

12 posted 2001-04-19 06:32 PM

Marie: Thank you for reading. Spring is about in the NW finally.

"I am not now that which I have been."

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