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Across A Heartfelt Sigh
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Across A Heartfelt Sigh |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Across A Heartfelt Sigh ~*Marge Tindal*~  Out across a heartfelt sigh I saw your memory flutter by Knowing the joy that you could bring I touched you softly on the wing ~*~ Drew you back within my longing Held you again in sweet belonging Brushed a teardrop from my eye As you came closer to my sigh ~*~ Felt my heart begin to soar Across the bridge to evermore Where we frolicked in the bliss Blown together on an angel's kiss ~*~ Kissed you softly with angelic love Bid you farewell - to the great above I'll meet you at the gates of heartfelt sigh When again your memory comes fluttering by ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Oh Marge. Feeling this. *Peace you. |
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Just A Woman Senior Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 507 |
Marge, this is completely stunning. Excellent write! I'm saving.  "Often the test of courage is not to die but to live" |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Well look who the angels are talking to today....someone who can share their blessings.... |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
I love the words of your heart! |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge--You make the flutter of a memory, so sweet...it would be lovely to see what you see. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Margie-girl, you know I love this!  It's a keeper~Take care, Melissa~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SpitFire~ I hope the angel-kiss reached you and landed in your heart. Thank you, sweet gal. JustAWoman~ My little heartfelt sigh - just got bigger. Thanks so much. Karilea~ And I am blessed with blessings to share. Thank you for letting me share with you. JLR~ And that's just where they come from - thank you for enjoying them. Martie~ Touching one for you too, sweet sister-of-my-heart ! I love you.  Melissa~ Thank you, dear. Yes ... I would have known that - I'm so thankful for you. *Hugs* to all~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Ahhh but that is the sheer beauty of being in touch with your longing...you can beckon on the whisper of angel's wings that flutter - a favorite "feeling"... "Drew you back within my longing Held you again in sweet belonging". Lovely! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Mysteria~ Thank you so much for letting me know that you enjoy what I so enjoy doing ... I love to share this little *heartfelt sigh* with friends a'plenty ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
'tis a beautiful poem you have graced us with Marge... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Thank you, sweet Mike~ Such a pleasure for me to share with you. *Tried to reply TWICE to your re-work of 'I Love You ... Evermore' and got kicked out of my connection. It's got something to do with the ( )'s in the title ... as sometimes happens ... I'll try tomorrow from work. Boo-Hoo ! But know that I loved the sheer beauty of it !  *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
An especially beautiful piece, one that I can relate to very well.. |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Marge, This was so beautiful "sighing" Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Beautiful excellence, Marge... love it! |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
thank you for such tender words to shine.... be well....and hugs to you...Greeneyes~ *** "Within you I lose myself |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
You make many things flutter with this one, Marge. I love it when you try things on for sighs.. |
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tradewind Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 101 |
you certainly know how to touch the reader with your words...very beautifully done |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SongBird~ I just love the word relate ... Thank you so much. Cerenity~ Ah, shucks ... sweet gal~ You're just a push-over for a sigh ... (And I'm glad you are !) SuthernGal~ This little heart thanks you, gal ! GreenEyes~ I thank you for enjoying it. Visited your web site - nicely done. Will be back to see more. Balladeer~ You're so cute ! *Hug* TradeWind~ Thank you. My heart talking ... ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
marge..i love this so much...written with a loving heart, missing one they so adore.. it aches...and it makes me smile... hugs to you.. gale where am i...WHOA! and what am i doing in this handbasket!?! |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
Sigh! Sometimes memories are all we got. Thanks for the pleasant thought. Melton |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DG~ What perfect timing to bring this one back up today ... Thank you. Melton~ Yes ... and the beauty is that we have them at all .... Thank you for the kind reply. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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