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Dreamscape |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada 
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 ~*~ Dreamscape ~*~~*~ You whisper on my pillow. Set the stage my love. We shall be the only players. Mind’s eye suddenly drifts. Heart flutters in anticipation, As the palm fans my desires. Ebony solitude, tiara adorned sky. Love's promise returns, On the gentle whisper, Of an evening’s breeze. Revival of romantic nights. Stealing passion’s promise. All reality abandoned. Soon encased in an embrace. Minds hum a sweet meadow song. Drifting to enchanted ecstasy. Senses soaked, Freesia-scented night. Reveling in a moonlit escapade, Blinded by purple passion. I beg you my love, Stroke my heart with a feather. Softly sighing senses, Yearnings, desires fed. Beautiful melodies. Unearthly sounds envelope. Sweet, gentle touches savor. Soul caressed tenderly. Heartbeats in sync. Acting out desires, Bodies wasted, zenith reached. Unwillingly eyes now open. Magic dust rubbed away. Alone. Empty stage. Sun permeates my soul, And I whisper, Tonight my love. Dreamscape awaits. ~*~ Art~*Catching the Sun*~ Steve Hanks - www.world-web-art ~*~ Mysteria ~*~ © Copyright 2001 All Rights Reserved ~*~A poet is someone who reads more than they write ~*~ [This message has been edited by Mysteria (edited 03-30-2001).] |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Very sensual! |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
very lovely and sensual . I loved this! The presentation is very nice! Passion,imagination |
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Mabel A. Dilley Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859Seattle, WA, USA |
You are on a roll with these softly gentle excursions into sensual peace. Good job, and as usual perfect music and graphics to set the mood. "I am not now that which I have been." |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
VAS - Thank you for reading. Koko - Glad you liked the paint job! Julian - How nice, a senual roll- cool! he he |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You know, you fit your name quite well....this is absolutely mysteriously charming in presentation.... |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Sunshine: I sent it to a dear friend who said "I never know what is a dream and what is real with you!", thanks for reading it. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
This is nice...James |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Wow - beautifully sensual, wonderful as always! My library must have this!  Take care, Melissa~ |
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Alwye
Moderator
Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Oh my....this is so incredibly romantic and gorgeous. Truly wonderful imagery and softness...excellent poetry!  *Krista Knutson* |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Such a beautiful presentation of a wonderfully written poem...thank you for this, miss.. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Oh my I am blushing! Thank you all for enjoying this: ~ James Michael - thank you kind sir. ~ Melissa Honeybee - I kind of remember this stuff, but barely - lol, thanks for your lovely comment. ~ Alwye - thank you for saying it contained softness, as this was what I wanted to do. Bless your heart, and thank you. I wish I too lived in a stray sunbeam, how lovely. ~ Mr. Balladeer I feel honored you even read it, let alone let me a nice word - your work is awesome, so if I may this one time I shall wallow in your words! |
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Katherine Chandler Member
since 2001-03-07
Posts 280Florida, USA |
This may possibly be my all time favorite poem you've written. Such peace and harmony to your words, music that embraced each line and the picture graphic used worth a thousand words. Exceptionally brilliant poem, Sharon. I love when your muse writes this way, it makes me feel happy somehow. I hope you are proud of this masterpiece, I am.  KateGenuine poetry can communicate before it is understood. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Mysteria~ Yes ... delightfully different~ Delightfully delightful ! A gentle soft-sway of sensual movement ... I like !  LOTS ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Kate: Honey, I am glad if I ever make you smile you know that. I shall just have to fall in love again (just for you), and then these will start flowing again like milk and honey. Thank you sweet friend. Marge: It is different, but then I am one wierd girl let me tell you. Thanks for stopping in |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
So soft and sweet. You sure know how to set the mood my friend!! Well done. Lone Wolf Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Lone Wolf - Thank you...see, I have to write these so I don't forget in case a man does actually happen along sometime! LOL |
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