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Tiersdin
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0 posted 2002-07-06 07:14 PM



Circle the middle of the room
gritted teeth and clenching fists
plotting one another's doom
coyote growls and bobcat hiss
forget what's sacred, full moon rising
hear the warning bell go, "ding"
let the skies above keep watching
it's a fascinating thing
plot the murder of your lover
a union never meant to be
crazy man & insane mother
shall go down in history
Who will strike the final blow?
who will watch the other bleed?
who will be the first to go?
both will say, "it won't be me!"

~Tier
7/02


"I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..."

[This message has been edited by Tiersdin (07-06-2002 07:15 PM).]

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Krishankins
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1 posted 2002-07-06 07:59 PM


The fate of a love that was never meant to be.
I love it!!

A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground

wranx
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Moved from a shack to a barn
2 posted 2002-07-06 11:37 PM


Sounds like the title might be "Mexican Standoff".
Or
"Let's Get Ready To Rumble"

Well, "untitled" does have a certain, how you say?, Je ne sais Quoi.

This was a good look into something that, frankly, I never stuck around for.

~wranx

"Writing is a perfectly natural thing to do...provided it's done in private and you wash your hands afterward"....Heinlein.

Tiersdin
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3 posted 2002-07-06 11:39 PM


*laughing*

so you're a chicken, eh? (teasing)

this poem is the result of pure boredom and nothing else... you know what they say about idle minds!

~Tier

"I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..."

wranx
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Moved from a shack to a barn
4 posted 2002-07-06 11:44 PM


Well,
most of my "lady" friends could hit you with a gin whiskey bottle from 20 paces.

~wranx

"Writing is a perfectly natural thing to do...provided it's done in private and you wash your hands afterward"....Heinlein.

Tiersdin
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5 posted 2002-07-06 11:47 PM


Hahahahaha!

I'll bet! :p

~Tier

"I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..."

bsquirrel
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6 posted 2002-07-07 02:35 AM


What th'? Wranx and Tiersdin holding patter? Anvrill leaving PIP forever? Me without a smile in a message? THE WORLD MUST BE ENDING!!!!!!

Enjoyed, Tier. Always.

-m.

These smiling eyes are just a mirror for the sun.
-RHCP

MidnightSon
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between the gutter & the stars
7 posted 2002-07-07 03:30 PM


delightfully creepy.

it's our struggle for identity that leaves us all unknown

arthur
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england
8 posted 2002-07-07 05:44 PM


my money is on the bobcat
arthur

Tiersdin
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east coast
9 posted 2002-07-07 08:21 PM


*Chuckling*

Thanks everyone!

~Tier

"I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..."

devina
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Cali
10 posted 2002-07-08 05:41 PM


*creeping in ever so late*

All I can say...is boredom looks good on you from here!!!

enjoyed this...plot n all...

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...



LMNOP
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11 posted 2002-07-08 05:48 PM


Wow!, it sounded very orange ...

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