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Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2001-07-03 10:56 PM


You seem to see straight through me
As if I'm not even there
You are not even capable
Of holding my fragile stare

A look of pure disgust
Is what I see in your eyes
As the seagulls circle above
In the cloudy grey skies

A blur on society
Is how you see me
Without showing any interest
In how I came to be

I was once a successful businessman
Fancy suits I once used to wear
Many people once respected me
No one used to stare

You go home to your loving family
I spend the night on a park bench
You are surrounded by warmth and love
From the freezing cold my teeth I clench

My gloves they have no fingers
My clothes are full of holes
My shoes are falling apart
There are barely any soles

The hair around my face hangs limply
Such a fragile form am I
At night as I try to sleep
I wonder what it'd be like to die

Heaven would warmly welcome me
I'd never be treated as scum
No one would every say
"You're just a lazy, drunken bum!"

Such a paradise I'd find
Where no one would question me
We'd all be treated as equal
My spirit could be free

But this dream is at an end
As the morning sun invades my eyes
The pigeons are all around me
And I'm back home now I realise

© Copyright 2001 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
CrEaTuRe
Member
since 2000-01-01
Posts 260
Kuala Lumpur,Malaysia
1 posted 2001-07-04 03:54 PM


well said and i could for actually picture the person and how he felt... good piece  

Love CoMeS To ThOsE WhO Still HoPe AlThOuGh They've BeeN DiSaPpOiNteD,To ThOsE WhO StiLL BeLiEvE AlThOuGh ThEy'Ve BeeN BeTraYeD,LoVe KeEpS ThEm GoInG

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