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AngelInBound New Member
since 2000-04-19
Posts 3 |
are you going to change or do u expect me to. are you goint to try or do i have to give in to you why can't you show u care and not do things that hurt me why can't we speak like lovers why do you have to disagree i try and do the things u want i try not to hurt you at all i just wanna make you happy im almost at ur beaconing call but when are u there for me you don't wanna see me cry you don't wanna know my pain how do i know ur love is not a lie how can u understand me when u know nothing of who i am inside how can u expect things to work when u don't care what tears i've cried? i'll give you all my love i'll give all the support i can but i need to recieve some back maybe then my heart would mend how can you tell me not to do that and then you go and do the same thing i don't think it's very fair what happiness do ultimatiums bring? maybe you're too young for me maybe u think ur too good for me maybe we're wasting our time maybe it's just not meant to be i don't want to fear us speaking wondering if your gonna say we're thru i don't want any of this stuff i only want to love you i want us to both be happy im not out to win any game it's my heart that im risking here i love you and i want u to feel the same By Kellie Austin |
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ggrn3 Member
since 2000-08-17
Posts 433Nahunta Georgia U.S. |
Kellie It seems you looked deep inside of yourself and a present or recent relationship and came up with this very expressive jewel. Excellently penned. Once I started, I could not wait to read the ending. It flowed like a little short story.  Garfield |
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