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Marsha
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0 posted 2001-02-22 05:37 PM





Friendship An Acrostic

For the days when I’m feeling low
Right away you bring me a glow
I thank the day that I first met you
Ever your sense pulls me through
Not just by being there for me
Dear friend who I value constantly
Some people wouldn’t hear all this
Hear the heartbeat of poetry’s kiss
I only know that you are the one
Person who sees my personal sun

A Friendship like ours is strong and true
I’m so happy I have a good friend like you


Marsha




Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



© Copyright 2001 Marsha Grace Melody Todd - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-02-22 05:44 PM


NIce one. Greeting card material.
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Mushy~ you are such a dear heart.........this is wonderful...... hugs to you friend SEA
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3 posted 2001-02-22 05:57 PM


Well done acrostic...your friends will love this!
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4 posted 2001-02-22 10:39 PM


Marsha~
Sometimes you read a poem and say, "I wish I had written that."

And then sometimes you think,
"I wish this one was written about me !"

No matter who it was written to or for -
that has to be a wonderful friend you have !

I would hope to be the kind of friend to others -
that others have been to me.

*Hugs* to you, sweet poet.
You do the acrostics beautifully !
~*Marge*~


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5 posted 2001-02-23 06:25 AM


Mushy,
what a lovely friendship tribute this is, so well written.
write on
Kethry


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Marsha
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6 posted 2001-02-23 09:24 AM


Thank you everyone this is dedicated to each of my very dear precious friends, who i love each and everyone.

Take care and love as always
Mushy




Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



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7 posted 2001-02-24 10:48 AM


Beautiful acrostic and affections expressed herein...wonderfully done.

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8 posted 2001-02-24 01:25 PM


Mushy, where'd you get the delightful star? I don't recall seeing it in the available images.
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