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Dreams of Truth (reply to 1slick_lady, Abstract dreams)
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Dreams of Truth (reply to 1slick_lady, Abstract dreams) |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597
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Dreams of Truth (reply to 1slick_lady)(Abstract dreams) In abstract reality lover's dream dances with silence and so it might seem from hidden truth of day or cloud of night it brings the hungry search of soul to light. And would the cause of different ache be found brought from concealed to take on light and sound for her mind and eyes to believe the stream of the dreams of truth and the truth in dreams? There is now music and the wanting more with room and steps the freedom to explore so waiting heart could know how far how high two lovers might dance under moon in sky. krawdad 2/20-22/01 (and now back to my funk . . .) |
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ggrn3 Member
since 2000-08-17
Posts 433Nahunta Georgia U.S. |
Dreams of Truth "that two lovers may dance under moon in sky." Krawdad, you had excellent imagery here. I know that my love and I like dancing under moon in sky, but we prefer a little sand between our toes and water gently splashing against our ankles. Excellent write.  Garfield |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
e..........yes, i now dream the dream.......there are nightmares there too.....but ill be ok......i have to be!!! thank you so much for the poem....your sweet & you make me cry.....& ty for that too.......helen |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Krawdad, is this you love poem with imagery, if not got out of that funk right now and get to work mister! loved the poem Write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Enjoyed, Krawdad. Seems different from your former posts. sure glad to see you here. I was wondering if you'd abandoned us. virginia |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
That's kewl! I like it! flows and is beautiful! thank you for writing it! ~*Peachy Be*~ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
beautiful, e/k. Just beautiful. and helen? you're already okay!!!  |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
ggrn3 - thanks for the compliment, but I must say that virtually everything came from 1slick_lady's poem. helen, - you are very welcome . . . anytime . . . kethry - well, no it wasn't intended to be the workshop piece, but it may have to do. thanks for the read and glad you liked. virginia - kind of you to be concerned - I did sort of go away - seemed as tho there was a pulse of "uninviting air" at this site for awhile and I got really turned off - still part of my funk i guess . . . voiceless - thanks for stopping by. glad you enjoyed this. k/s - good to here from ya - glad you liked. and yes, i agree about h. |
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