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Marsha
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0 posted 2001-01-17 10:26 AM



Trace My Essence


Trace the essence of me there
Imprint my soul with lovers’ share
Lace my heart with sweetest taste
Of honeyed lips and passions race
Feel the depth and then touch me
With magic with the wonder to be
Trace my taste with fire
Heat my trace with desire

Piece the heart of me within
Entwine my soul with lovers’ sin
Fierce the flames breathing more
Spiral upward spread wings to soar
Fall into the fire and then fulfill me
With desire with the delight to be
Pierce my soul with fire
Flame my heat with desire

Touch the center of me here
Impale my soul with loves’ spear
Much too much I respond with heat
Inflame the heart feel the frantic beat
Follow the path that leads into me
With flames with the passion to be
Touch my heart with fire
Hold my touch with desire

Marsha



Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



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Sunshine
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1 posted 2001-01-17 10:53 AM


Marsha....

marsha marsha marsha....

goodness Lady....look what you've done....

Ok....I need to get off to a room by myself just so I can say...

Good God...look at that woman go...

library material...

SEA
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2 posted 2001-01-17 11:42 AM


Marsha~ you are on fire!! This is so......WOW!......I love it, but of course, you knew I would!   -SEA
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3 posted 2001-01-17 12:55 PM


Oh yes. . . indeed. . . *whew*. . .

Marsha love. . . you've outdone yourself with this one. . . wow. . .  

-------------------------------------------------------

To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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4 posted 2001-01-17 02:08 PM


can't say i haven't felt THAT way before! sizzling.... almost burnt me but when you get too close to something so HOT, that could happen! LOL... (it was fun, though!.. hope for it again.... and again and again... ROFL!)

great writing, marsha!

Marsha
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5 posted 2001-01-18 06:00 AM


Kari love, these were supposed to have the shape of cups, (as in loving cup) but I don't think I've got the knack love. You do know if you tell fibs the smile fairy will have to visit you and beat you up don't you love. (Thank you love, you lie so sweetly, so I'll thank you)
And as I'm exacting retribution from Kethry I'll have retribution from you too. I'll set you a challenge that will make your head spin. Are you ready? A Phoenix From The Flames. There you go   Ha!! na na na na naaaaaaa yes and by tomorrow dear heart! Friday 19!
It doesn't have to be an epic love
'taint life grand
Take care love, and mush mush!
              Majestic Nemesis Marsha
                          

Marsha exits stage left whistling off key
(Or I will after I've thanked the others)

Circe love, thank you, truly I thank you, but the best thing about it is, I get the chance to seek retribution   Not from you love, you haven't been standing there, with a whip. But that doesn't mean you can set me a challenge today!  
I knew you'd like it      Because you always do, but tthat's because you're sweet.
Take care
             Mushy
                

Sven love, thank you dear heart, I haven't thought of a suitable challenge for you love! But I will    You can count on it! And don't give me that innocent look, the What have I done! You colluded with them all, you know you did.  
Now Kethry has the Acrostic, Kari has the Phoenix, and to you I give 'Nemesis Mushy'
Yes!!!
Na na na na naaaaaaaaa   by Friday, not late in handing it in. And not at midnight either love! No tricks  
Take care love
                 Mushy
(Yes!! It's good to work you told me   )

Doreen love, thank you so very muchly love. Not that I got the shape of the cups right. They look more like my Bailey's goblet,
Take care love
                   Mushy
                      


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



Kethry
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6 posted 2001-01-18 06:28 AM


Mushy,
look what you did, raised a "glow" on you and me.
Write on Kethry.
BTW  NO fair! I want to trade with Sven!
Kethry.


Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.



Marsha
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7 posted 2001-01-19 08:09 AM


Kethry love, a glow, ahhhh Kethry has a glow on show!!

Thank you love I hope so  
Take care
                  Mushy
                    


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



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8 posted 2001-01-19 09:52 AM


Marsha,
my god lady, you go!! this was awesome.
full of fire, desire, and heat...my 3
favorite things lol. in all seriousness
excellent poem. truly loved this and its
going into my library of favs. take care

love ya
amy  

"A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart and can sing it back to you when you have forgotten
the words."



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