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0 posted 2001-01-18 10:22 AM



Phoenix
From The Flames

Immortal mortal existence
seek thee in constellation’s light
lone beauty, beauteous right
blood red in fire’s might

heart of Arabian mind and lore
renew anew of hope and dream
longingly lives, dies, lives to fly
dusting off ashes in drawn out sigh

rise, Phoenix, rise
and with you
take these dreams


01.18.01


[This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 01-18-2001).]

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (05-02-2005 02:07 PM).]

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SEA
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Beautifully done Sunshine!   -SEA
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2 posted 2001-01-18 10:44 AM


oooo i like this sunshine very good yuh
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3 posted 2001-01-18 01:26 PM


SEA....Marsha is such a taskmaster....tch tch tch...but I'm so glad you enjoyed...

Heyya Walt....good to see you....thanks!

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4 posted 2001-01-18 03:09 PM


like it very much.....  

Charisma

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5 posted 2001-01-18 03:17 PM


Sunshine,
you really showed with this write, not a stretch at all for you, but I'm glad we got to see it. It's beautiful!
write on
Keth


Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.



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6 posted 2001-01-18 05:44 PM


Sunshine--I think this challenge you met superbly.

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7 posted 2001-01-18 06:52 PM


Charisma, thank you...

Kethry...no, dear, you stretched much farther...well done on your behalf!...

Poeminister, I am so glad you liked this, thank you...

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8 posted 2001-01-18 10:04 PM


just had to be the one didn't you. . . make the rest of us look bad. . . LOL

great poem. . .  

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9 posted 2001-01-19 07:58 AM


Kari love, HA! okay so you met and matched it, as I said I should have thought of something a lot lot harder. It is truly utterly wonderful. But if you think that's going to stop me from running around in here causing a stir you have another think coming dear heart.
It really is wonderful, now no muttering, or plotting revenge you. After all I'm Nemesis, the daughter of Night.   So naturally I come after Sunshine.  
Take care love
                 Mushy
                    


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



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10 posted 2001-01-19 09:05 AM


Sven...not hardly...she just caught me on a busy day!...

Marsha you little imp...have a wonderful, puckish day, celebrating your birthday and all...

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