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When A Man Loves
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When A Man Loves |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas 
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...Written long ago and posting as an opposite to "When A Woman Loves" by A Whisper's Caress... When A Man Loves When a man loves, you can see it in her eyes, softly glistening, starry skies, loving all at which she looks; hear it in her breathy sighs, when she thinks of him; feel the fiery heat of silky skin, where her hand touches your arm, know it in the way she walks, talks, laughs, and when she thinks no one can see, smiles that inner smile meant just for him. When a man loves, his woman glows, a fiery, golden, pulsing light, softly tempered when new life conceives. w. james beard, jr. [This message has been edited by jwesley (edited 11-27-2000).] |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
What an intriguing perspective...recognizing a man's love through the eyes and actions of his woman. Very excellent work, sir  |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
OOOooooo Exactly!!!! So tender and delicate...and so very very perceptive JW...sounds like you can read a woman very well my friend! Excellent writing~The best and most beautiful things in the world cannot be seen or even touched ---- they must be felt with the heart~ *??* |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Wonderful poem. . . and yes, it's all in the eyes. . . --------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JWesley~ Absolutely beautiful. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
yes, yes, yes, yes,.... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Thank you much, my friends. Have a wonderful Tuesday! jwesley |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
When a man loves, you can see it in her eyes, softly glistening, starry skies, loving all at which she looks; hear it in her breathy sighs, when she thinks of him; feel the fiery heat of silky skin, where her hand touches your arm, know it in the way she walks, talks, laughs, and when she thinks no one can see, ================= JW this is sooooo romantic and lovely... and you have captured well the inner contentment felt when we know we are loved. wonderful writing in this sincere piece. jm Sprayed across my heart and hers Danced butterflies in the wild This angel, this woman , who loves me with the innocence of a child. ~DeVante~ |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
JWesley~ WOW! This is beautiful! This is a wonderful way of looking at it, and very true, a woman glows when she is loved....  -SEA |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
J., absolutely beautiful!!!! Very nicely partnered with "When A Woman Loves" Look within the heart of a poet, and you will see a reflection of their soul. |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
...very sweet...i like this concept.. nicely written! hugs, g "so lift your heart with mine...the depth to which it grieves is the height to which it can celebrate!" -Lisa Hussey |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Thank you all my friends, love IS! And all else tags along. And AWC, never even thought about this until I read WHEN A WOMAN LOVES, and then I said, wow, a marriage in the making! Thanks. jwesley |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* this is beautiful and filled with romance. It goes without saying that I would love it. Thank you so much for a very enjoyable read. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. [URL=http://path2riches.com]http://path2riches.com |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
and thank YOU, startime, for the kind words. jwesley |
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Ladycat
since 1999-07-05
Posts 782At the edge and a doorway,TX |
Very wonderful written piece. So moving. I would love to get permission to use your piece in the feb issue of Digital Passions too if you don't mind. Love, Lady Live in my world just once and you'll find yourself enraptured. |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
This is the kind of love poem I needed to perk up this dreary November Tuesday. I love how this one flows. I agree with ladycat, it would fit in well at Digital Passions. Keep up the great work! "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Ladycat & Lovebug...I am humbled that you would want it and am honored by all the wonderful comments on it as I've never considered it one of my better ones. Thank you for asking. Yes, you may. jwesley [This message has been edited by jwesley (edited 11-28-2000).] |
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